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plz update, i'v been wayting so long to know what's gonna happen next :(
plzzzzzzzzzz thankyou:)xxxxx

Get it going... Finish this!

love this story sooo very much....i am soo happy that you updated *does a happy dance* update soon please

The genuine critique: There is an unbelievable number of spelling, punctuation, and grammatical errors in the story. There are mistakes in context, as well as contradictions in descriptions from one chapter to another.

The genuine opinion: Overall, this is a very nice story idea. Reading slowly allowed me to piece everything together, and from what I could understand, it's an interesting take on an adventure full of endless potential. A good beta-reader would fix all the cosmetic problems, letting the real brilliance of the story shine through. I hope you continue. :)

I really like the story but I wanted to offer some constructive criticism. The word you are looking for is "meeting" not "meaning". Its used in several places.

Please Update Soon!! I mean I don't normally like fics like this but this is so well written, I never thought anyone could pull it off. Oh and Naraku, just gross and wrong.

i liked this story so far keep up the up dating!

love it love it love it love it love it ......update update update please please please

This is a fun story. I can't wait for more Rin/Sess interaction. I love that he saved her from drowning! The thought of Sesshoumaru jumping into the freezing water to pull her out, and then resuscitate her makes my heart happy.

UUUUUUUUhhhh, I'm going to need you to update. like now. I just started reading and already I'm goning through withdrawl symptoms.