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OH, WOWOWOWOWOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS TOTALLY SWEET!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait for the next chap......... u have to update soon, pease??????????? Kagome is SOSOSOSOSOSOSOSO PRETTY, I wonder what inu would say...........

kag: DON'T TELL INUYASHA!!!!!!!!

rachi: don't worry, I wonna say nothin bout nothin........

Miroku: *smirks* hello kagome........

kag: *SLAP* HENTAI!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU ARE SUPPOSED TO BE WITH SANGO!!!!!!!!

Mir: It's the hand, my mind is TOTALLY clean, it's the HAND!!!!

rachi, kag, sango: RRIIIGGHHHTTT..................................................

sry, Inu can't comment, he in too much shock.........but he is so cute when he is thinking!!! who m i kidding, he's ALWAYS SO KAWAII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! nway, GREAT CHAP!!!!! Keep up the great work, update soon pease tank u n ja ne!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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can"t wait fort he next chapter update soon !

the summery said it would be m/f!

Cool, an actual plot! lol, jk. I wonder what happens with the angel? N eways, if you keep writin, mayhaps we'll find out?

Nyah~ So far so good! I really like the plot you have going on. But it makes it harder to read when you hae so many "you are's" and "I am's" n 'stuff...considering the human dialect isn't like that, there are shortened words n' stuff..myabe work on that some next chapter? ^-^ I can't wait for it to come out! Ganbatte ne~

Snoe

I like it. update soon