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person aaaaa
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
K/K pairins ar some of the suckyest iv read those 2 just dont good together .. do us all a favor an delete this story
person denalia
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I really like the creative plot you have so far. I recommend making your chapters a little longer. Please update asap. Im hooked and cant wait to read more.
person HauntedReality
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, thanks for the shout out! I love how original your story is and I enjoy the description in your writing. Also, so well edited! j/k Anyway, I can't wait to see what happens next!
person Kagochan
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story and I cant wait to read more. I do advise to maybe add more spaces between phrases so it is easier on the eyes. Besides that no complaints. Please keep me updated.
person HauntedReality
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like the way you describe things. I am curious to see how this progresses.
person HauntedReality
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi Nikoyta! I enjoyed your first chapter. I like the way you started out with a hint of mysterious and apparently angsty things to come. I also thought all the humor was amusing and very in keeping with the characters. I can't wait to see how this progresses.