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by Maelik

person ichie-chan(too lazy to sign in)
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a really good story. i love it so far. please continue and update when you can!
person Drunky
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Makes a face* You didn't ask Drunky to review the text before you put it on did you? Drunky is mad. How can you forget to give Drunky the correcting work she deserves? Drunky is going to give Mealik the silent treatment for a month! Lol, you know I'm kidding, don't you? Drunky is in a perfectly good mood, cause she was a ble to read your stuff!

Now, what is it I wanted to say?

Yeah, Yamasso is as much a kid as the pups! And what was Miroku doing watching the two as they bathed in the first place? Sure, he might have been curious to see how they act, but there are much better times to spy than when someone is washing! Lol. And I didn't know Naraku to be 'that' good with his powers! And Kaede was just perfect. So belivable that I automatically heard her voice in my head as I read. Sometimes I could hear Inu that way, but not as often.

I'm not making sense again! Whatever, I'll stop writing here. Buh bye!

Your Drunky
person kit-kit
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so sesshomaru and yamoness are mates and the kids are seesy kids that is so cool i bet inuyasha knows by his little comment about the same pose thing. i wonder who shot that arrow.
person ichie-chan
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like Yamasso ^-^ he's kool! Update soon!
person kit-kit
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i see big problems arising from kouga being around but anyway good chapter aslways and i can't wait for the next chapter.
person kit-kit
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my god this is such a good story i can't imaagine inuyasha watching kids but he seems to be doing find if you ask me especially since he seems to beable to the two like open books. i also notice how the two boys seem to remind me of inuyasha and a little bit of sesshomaru.
person Golden
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wee! ^^ Good update! I can't wait until a new chapter comes up! ^.^ The two brother's seem like very intresting charaters! And your doing really really really good at keeping everyone in charater!!! Er.... somewhat.... ^___^ *thinks of inu sleeping with his mom* KAWAII!!!!! ^__^! Update soon!!!

TTFN! Ta Ta For Now!
person Golden
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is good. I like this a lot!!!! Keep it up I wanna see more!!!! *_*!

TTFN! Ta Ta For Now!