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September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
That was an awesome story!!! That was great!! Will you have her and InuYasha have intercourse? Can't wait to read the next one!
That was an awesome story!!! That was great!! Will you have her and InuYasha have intercourse? Can't wait to read the next one!
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September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please must have more. I loved it. I can't wait until you write part 2.
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September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Decent, but the paragraphing, punctuation and spelling need work to make it easier to read.
Not a bad start to things though! ;)
Not a bad start to things though! ;)
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September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved it, Loved it, Loved it.
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September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was a great story. I really hope you will make a squeal to this with a very discreptive sex scene in it like the discrepitve scene you have wrote. I will be kinda dissapointed if there is not a squeal. This was one of the best inuyasha stories i've read. So please make a squeal or this story will be imcomplete. Thanks.
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September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
There's more to this, right? Another chapter is on its way, right? *puppy eyes* I love this so far!
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September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it, Not too short and a good length to keep me reading, Hope to see more chapter ^_^
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August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm surprised that you haven't already gotten at least one review for this fic. It's very passionate and emotional. You were a bit slack about separating the text into paragraphs, but aside from that, I loved it.