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for The Long Kiss Goodnight

by Maymay

person Serenity
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was a sad but great story, though I'm sorry that Sesshoumaru died. This is what happen when you hate your only family and the one you secrtly loves. But you could try and wreight a #2 chapter, if you want.
person snowfall
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so sad. Please continue the story. It would help for you to get a beta, but it is such a good story that even without one, I would read it.

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
person anonyme
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow
person kiiru
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
did you just kill sesshomaru?...
person CASSIE
schedule October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I DEMAND THAT YOU CONTINUE THIS. SESS'S SWORD WOULD WANT HIM TO LIVE OR ELSE IT WOULD NO LONGER HAVE A PURPOSE. I MEAN COME ON NOW INUYASHA CAN'T JUST START TO SHOW TRUE FEELINGS FOR SESS AND THEN ALLOW HIM TO DIE. PLEASE IT WAS REALLY GOOD AND THEN IT STOPPED. PLEASE I BEG YOU CONTINUE THIS STORY!
person Cassie
schedule September 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heeeeeeeeey!

You can't just leave this story like that. There has to be more like Sess's sword pulsing and Inu bringing him back to life and learning to become the Inu he once was or something like that just please continue your story! You are such a good writer I felt wronged when the story stopped so if you have more or write more email me
person sabrina
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg you did not just omg omg omg how could you kill sesshomaru-sama.!!!!?u shu shall suffer!!11
person katt
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was very sweet well kind of but still sweet indeed
person Polka dot
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Makes you wonder what happened to the gang, hmm?
person Sun-chan
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I totally did *not* expect that ending.Great fic!