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August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like your story so far...just a few things to be careful of. Now I'm not a English major, but use spell check a few words were spelled wrong. Also, beginning sente are are always capital. There were a few other things....but in all I really enjoyed it....update soon....
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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yo. I really like your story so far it is so cute. So please update soon. But you do need to be more careful when it comes to spelling and grammar mistakes. But other than that the story is perfect. So until your next chapter... Ja!!=]