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July 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Once again Inusgirl, I am sorry you have to deal with these childish reviewers. They are just lackeys of the one author who think you are plagerizing. I believe there is nothing wrong with your story and you should continue to post it.
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July 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excuse me... ummm wouldn't Sesshy have run into him sometime or another considering IY went to his old house IN the Western Lands???? and how did Sesshy defeat it? GODs. and how does Sesshy travel through the well? PLOT HOLE!
also, IY's sword has the ability to break through barriers! he gains this ability after his encounter with the bat youkai (the arc w/ Shiori, the bat hanyou); his sword turns red, and he is able to cut through barriers like burning through butter. oi.
again, poorly written. Rin is stupid and poorly written, AND OOC. you write her like a retard. also, Sesshy is WAY OOC. yeesh.
also, IY's sword has the ability to break through barriers! he gains this ability after his encounter with the bat youkai (the arc w/ Shiori, the bat hanyou); his sword turns red, and he is able to cut through barriers like burning through butter. oi.
again, poorly written. Rin is stupid and poorly written, AND OOC. you write her like a retard. also, Sesshy is WAY OOC. yeesh.
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July 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm quite satisfied that this is not a steal of "Hello Again." I am beginning to be embarrassed I thought such poorly written drivel was a borrow... And Supercool... I'd email you if you had the balls to leave an email... But frankly you make me LMAO. BUT NAAA I'll get my shits and giggles watching her defend herself... kthxbye.
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July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
simply revolting, poorly written, corny, sappy, and stupid. a waste of my time reading it. you ought to be ashamed of yourself for posting something so worthless.
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July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Please update soon!
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July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I haven't read Tat Brt Breath away yet but I will, This looks very promising.
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July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I reallyl like your story so far. Its really good and i hope you updata asap i really want to know what happens.