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Please bring Fluffy (Sesso) back to his senses and character! And why is Inuyasha so pissy?

I have read the insulting remarks other immature and cowardice reviewers have left inusgirl. As an author myself I have t wit wit with the same thing. Let me give you a bit of advice, you can't please everyone but yourself and that is what counts. What proof do others have of plagiarism? If they have no solid evidence then their accusations are purely speculation and hold no ground. Just know that in your heart you did not plagiarize. Your stories are truly works of art that deserve the Pulitzer prize and it also gives myself inspiration to write even though people try and shoot it down every chance they get. Keep updating this wonderful story and ignore the harsh remarks of others. They know that in their hearts they are jealous and want you to fail miserably. Remember your stories are like your children, nurture and put your ideas into them and they will not disappoint you. I hope I am of some help of taking the burden of flames from you and giving you peace of mind to continue this story. Good luck with the rest of your masterpieces.

Lady

well I think this is good. Please keep writing. I liked the first story and the sequel is great. I almost feel sorry for Sessy but then agian it is only going to cause problems if he decides to pursue those desires. I am actually glad he feels bad about it. I am a big Inu/Kag fan and don't really like Sessy/Kag fics. If is is written well then it is ok but many times they are just thown together. Anyway back to the story please keep writing I like this story.

First Supercool... I sign my reviews.

Now for the actual review.

Inusgirl your story could be much better if you didn't rely so heavily on dialogue to advance the story. Sometimes the best moments come in narrative. The second criticism is that Sesshomaru is way out of character, with no explaination of the change of heart.

Ok, I can tell this is going to be a touchy issue and by no means do I wish to offend anyone....

While I agree with your other reviewers that the charactere Ore OOC, I think their methods of informing you are a bit aggressive. While I did read "Goodbyes" by Delkaidin a long time ago, I don't remember the particulars of the story or how close you came to it with your fic. So, I'm not in the position to judge you on that.

I've been a victim of plagerism myself and I know how frustrating it feels when're're an author that spends a lot of time on his/her work to find out that another person has ripped off your material. So, I'm not surprised by the heat you're receiving from these other reviewers.
But like I said, I'm not in the position to judge you.

If you want to make this story better, I would suggest that you watch some Inuyasha episodes and study the characters closely for their personality and habits. I find this method is working for me now and the characters are bit more realistic when I write them on paper.

This is very good I hope you continue soon. I really am enjoying this story

OMG!! I just love your story!!
U got to update as soon as possible!

It gets worse. I didn't think it was possible for one person to stink this badly at writing.
You have managed to prove me wrong. There is no description to your story, how am I supposed
to visualize anything if you brush over the details in your rush to get to the dialogue? And, you
have Sesshoumaru so OOC. Please go to school and pay attention in class. Come back to this when you have
a real story, not one that where you borrowed the idea and thought you could do better. It is always better to
blaze your own trail than to follow in someone else's.

Some of you reviewers are way too harsh and insulting. First of all, her fic isn't that terrible. The grammar and spelling are acceptable and the paragraphs well formed. While the characters are a bit OOC, she could use constuctive criticism to improve that and not insults.

Before you all jump down her throat, consider that the idea for this fic is one that almost any Inu/Kag writer could have thought up. Just because another author had a similar story doesn't mean she is stealing anything.

good story can you add me to your noteds list if you have it up?