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February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
One huge complaint.
His mothers name was Izayoi.
There are a few flaws in this, but all in all,
its not illiterate and I appreciate that to no end.
continue this, but whatever you do, just DONT make this
a Sesshy and Kagome fic. I think I will die if you do.
His mothers name was Izayoi.
There are a few flaws in this, but all in all,
its not illiterate and I appreciate that to no end.
continue this, but whatever you do, just DONT make this
a Sesshy and Kagome fic. I think I will die if you do.
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February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another plot hole would be the Tessaiga leaving his side
as well as Sesshoumaru being able to surpass the well.
Still you have good thoughts, I think you just need a little
more time to get them gathered together and do a little more
research. I know it's just a hobby but, there really are
people on this site that have a true obsession **me for one**
and it's like a little escape from their lives.
trust me, a little research into the history of japan and
a closer look at the original story created by the magificant
magnaka Takahashi Rumiko, will prove to really better your
writing thoughts.
as well as Sesshoumaru being able to surpass the well.
Still you have good thoughts, I think you just need a little
more time to get them gathered together and do a little more
research. I know it's just a hobby but, there really are
people on this site that have a true obsession **me for one**
and it's like a little escape from their lives.
trust me, a little research into the history of japan and
a closer look at the original story created by the magificant
magnaka Takahashi Rumiko, will prove to really better your
writing thoughts.
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OKA OKA this is relli starting to piss me off cus this is fucking turning in the area of a sess/kag fic i can handle them but 'd rether NOT HAVE ONE AFTER THE FIRST ONE!
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You must update soon please, I love it. Oh yeah , keep up the awesome work ^_~
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your storys I can't wait to see what others you come up with. :)
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope that you finish the story hon. I can't wait to see what will happen next if you are going on with it. :)
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July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute story...I agree about unkind reviews, constructive criticism is one thing, but just being mean is pretty pathetic. Keep writing, smiles.
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March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Must have more of the wonderful story!^_^ Comment: I love the InuyashaxKagome thing...but Why can't Fluffy(Sesshy) wait for Rin to grow up!!!!! He'd be a lot happier. (At least I think so.) I mean she kinda does love him already. She called him "dashing" in a recent episode (cute!).
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story, are you going to leave it a INU/KAG?