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I kind of wish you could update this story. It looks like it could be a very good one. An angst one, but good.

Hi there, just wanted to say, great story, I want to know what happened to Sesshoumaru and Rin in the beginning. I hope you update, I really like this story, I think it's interesting and fun, tee hee hee, not really 'fun', but you know. I'm right now is curious as a kitten, I hope you update soon so I can see what had happened between the both of them. This story is complicated yet interesting, I like it a lot, so I hope you continue it. Arigato ne, I hope you see your update soon, keep up the great work, and you had some VERY interesting chapters. Keep it up! You're doing great!

Is Rin some kind of lose woman or something if she is can you make her stop. please
Any way love your chapter and what up with the thunder dude
next chapter soon!!!!

Nice, although the character's are a little OOC in their actions, I don't see it as some to really noctice. Instead it helps add to the plot. Update soon!

wow, another great chapter. im definately intrigued. keep up the great work and update soon!

I was just telling DH there were some well written stories here. Thank you.

another great chapter.....I'm piss off at Kohaku not letting Sesshomaru talk to Rin....I hate anyone who would stand in the way on thier love.....What does Sesshomaru do for a living, is it important to the plot.....JUST UPDATE SOON PLEASE....I NEED MORE...

ooohhh i like it keep up the good work ^.^ ppllleeeaaasseee keep posting ^.^

I like it. It is very well written and looks like it might be a interesting story. The plot is very good so far. Good job.

Actually a very good story. With my love for Sess and Rin, I do hope that they work things out to be together in your fic. He's in such bad shape and I suspect that it's because of her. Usually it's because of someone that you love/care for deeply that you tend to go overboard with drinking and smoking, but the biggest isays ays the careless way they allow their life, dwelling, and self go to the wayside. Been there, done that. I like Kohaku and in the beginning of the series I thought him and Rin made a good couple, but getting deeper into the series and fanfic, I don't see that anymore. Rin has a devoted connection to Sess and that kind only stems from love. Okay,...so I'm rambling here, but hey...
Anyway, I think this is well written and I'll be looking forward to more updates.