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schedule
June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good story, but you spell it scent for the smell and sent for thngs like sending a letter
schedule
June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, this is great so far. you really have something nice and sweet going on here. keep it up and update again when you get the chance!!!
schedule
June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! Your story was really sweet! I had a smile strechted across my face the entire thing. The only thing I would complain about is the grammar and the spelling. I work some of the kinks out if I were you. It makes a whole lot of a difference... But besides that I really enjoy it so far! Keep up the good work!