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July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE your story!! The wierd thing is that my name is Portia!! My mom named me after the Portia in Shakespear.. So when I read your latest chapter I thought it was ironic. Anyways keep up the good work ;)!! <("<)
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July 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WONDERFULL JOB! Tait ait was worth it. Please write more.
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July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What the hell is going on? I can't ever get this story straight. So is this really happening? Or is she dreaming it? Is this based off her fatasies? How is she going to wake up or get back home? I am so lost. *sigh* I guess I will have to wait and see what is going on.
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July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm still loving the story! I really wish you would update though... I mean I'm not one to talk, but still. I can't wait to see what happens with Inuyasha! I mean I really want to see how this little love thing is going to turn out... WRITE SOON!
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July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WONDERFUL story. I love your writing style. But I'm dieing to find out what happenes after the "falling into the unknown chapter" I havn't every reveiwed for any story I've read on this sight but I really want to read more of this one.
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June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, first the criticism:
You need an editor. You really need an editor. Your English is difficult to understand, you use incorrect words frequently, and your grammar has a tendency to be really bad. You might want to find someone who is willing to edit for you, because...
(Now for the good stuff:)
The story is really good. The characters are fun, the period is fun, the direction the plotline is going is really fun. I love the way you've taken all the Inuyasha characters and made them believable in this totally different scenario. I can't wait for the next chapter. In fact, the story is so good that I'm willing to ignore most of the issues that would be covered if you had an editor. But if you had an editor, it would only be better!
You need an editor. You really need an editor. Your English is difficult to understand, you use incorrect words frequently, and your grammar has a tendency to be really bad. You might want to find someone who is willing to edit for you, because...
(Now for the good stuff:)
The story is really good. The characters are fun, the period is fun, the direction the plotline is going is really fun. I love the way you've taken all the Inuyasha characters and made them believable in this totally different scenario. I can't wait for the next chapter. In fact, the story is so good that I'm willing to ignore most of the issues that would be covered if you had an editor. But if you had an editor, it would only be better!
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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOOOO SCARRRYYYY
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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it so much. What's the name of your fic on mm.org? I've been looking for it by your name and can't find it on there. Update soon plaese and tell me were to find it. Thanks.
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June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story..i look foreward to the updates every time i check my stories on AFF. Please update soon!
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June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHAT THE HOW DARE HE SAY THAT