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I really love this story, I hope that you update soon please.

Nice to see you writing again. My sympathies for your grandmother. Good chapter, very well written(even the Lemon), hope to see more soon, but write at your leisure. Later.

This story... HOT... that's all i can say, this is red-hot and good! Are you going to update this again soon?

holy crap! tat waz good! your stories are totally awesome! they are just all so original! i dont think i can wait ne longer! plz update soon!

update soon plz! its getting so HOT between inu and kag! lol! they are so cool together!

This sounds just like a book I've read befor it was one of my fav smut novels, I like it better with kagome I wounder is Sess is the lord I soooooooooooo hope he is

Nooooooooooooooooooo!! It can't be how could you do that *sninffel* *sniffel* The Earl of Bath was Inuyasha?????????? It should have been the lord of the West he would have been so good fo rthe part!! Inuyasha does not make a good Marcus *tears










8 oh by the by -- I found the book that your copying from it's called Enslaved by Virginia Henley I am wondering if when you our lady kagome goes back in time will it be to japan? or back to roman like in the book? You know you can go off the story... thouhgt you did quote word for word some of the best part but I couldn't believe you wrote "riding" instead of mounts, I quote "you are certainly lovely enough to be sa lady and your voice is quite cultured, but it rather gave the game away when you were accompanied by Allegra. She runs one of the finest riding academies in london. she supplies half the aristoracy with mounts." unqote and the other part I wasn't happy with was the"kiddnapping" part it wasn't like the he was more flirtish:) ook that sall i had bad to say other wise it was a pretty good idea but i am a die hard kagome/Sess fan soooooooo. your not getting any good remark on the pairing from me :)

Well, I just wanted to let you know that I think you are doing a superb job. This story is getting good. I know a lot of hentais like to read sex, sex and more sex, but I think its good when a writer makes the reader wait for it. It builds up a lot of anticipation and makes the story much more worthwhile. Plus thats one major thing that sets it apart from most of the other "adult" stories on this site. I look forward to your update.

Thank goodness most of the time i come on this site is to read your story its the one i always look for first, however i'm very sadden that someone you love has such a bad think, when you write i'll be here to read it. when ever that may be ^_^

Wow, I read all 10 chapters in an hour. This is such a great story. I have to ask though... how closely does your story resemble "Enslaved?" Is it the same story with the names changed or did you just use the same general idea? Either way your writing is very compelling. I haven't yet read all of your posted chapters but I did read your author note at the end (chpt. 16). I hope that your grandmother will be ok. I can wait for chapters so please take your time. Ja ne...