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by Ethril112

person LD
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a very short but good chapter. I hope you get your 10 reviews soon so chapter3 comes out. What I want to know is if the hunky Sessohomuru a soa son who is the mother??? You have got to say who in the story eventually. Right??? Keep writing I look forword to the next chapter!
person Anime_and_Toons
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like the plot so far, but thier is still the question of who is the mother?? I ask of you!!!!
person Arctic Fox
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wish I could spell like you **sniff, sniff**
But anyway I like your story and very good, especialy
for your first time.