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by Rider

person Tom
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
...Thats a twist, ah it would work for a day or two but not indefinitly. They would eventualy figure it out and force Kanna back into her own body. Still quite good.
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P.S. My story is Redemption under my Code Name Rommel17
person Tom
schedule July 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's still good, but Inu Yasha would smell Kanna from far off. But something tells me Kagome should be the first to come across Kanna...

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P.S. My Pen name is Rommel17.
person me
schedule June 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more chapters
person Tom
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More Urrah
Semper Fidelis
person Tom
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Come on you're killing us. More.
person Anon
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very entertaining
person Tom
schedule May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You still have my support
person Tom
schedule May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Additionally when Miroku finally catches Kanna would there be a controling rosary. Just a thought.
person Tom
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Enough. Miroku/Kanna now before I become a gigantic bubble monster like Shippou. Oh one more thing, during the fuedal age polgamy was common, so Sango will want Miroku too. Just an option if you wish to pursue it, besides Miroku won't complain.
person Tom
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm seems the only one who won't panic would be Kagome stumbleing upon Kanna while she either bathing or tending her wounds, where Kagome decides to capture her to show up Inu Yasha