rate_review Reviews

Well...that's certainly a different take on a S/R fic with the rest of the IY gang. I think I kinda like it.

estiestion...perhaps you could combine some of the chapters? Fewer longer chapters just seem easier to read than many short chapters...but that's just my opinion. Either way, it's wri writing, so keep it up!

OMG what a cliffhanger. Ahhhh. Touching, continue

that's more like it.

They are made for each other.!
critism? just to short for now. oh maybe that nothing was told about the sleeping arangments. I doubt that she lay down next to him without a thought or two.

migi-chan

nu!!!u!!!! cliffy!!! good cliffy but still a cliffy!!! *begs* plz post soon*hops up and down ing*ing* oh yea Great work ^-^v

Thought I wouldn't be paying attention for you to get another one out there...! HA! Love that he wants her to come on tour with him, you can do all kinds of things with that.... well, I mean about extending the story further and stuff... but you CAN"T just let him off the hook with an I'm sorry, Rin... and her It's ok I've been a bitch. I think she had a right for a bit bitchiness. Being deceived (tricked whatever) is far more that bitchiness. That other was planned, deliberate. OK enough of my bitchiness, huh?

heh, wondered how long it'd take him to wind up on the other side of the curtain! Still going strong on the chapters! Love it, Love it, Love it!

i love the new chapters,the story as well. ur doing a really good job. can't wait for more.

Ok... I've spouted off my mouth...or my fingers since I'm typing actually...enough, huh? Every three hours, huh? All day long! Watch I'll lay down and you'll put one up ahead of me now. Ok... he's trying to be good... and you're taking them into the city of sin... which will lead up to some interesting writing. Umm.... how's Inu and Rin facing each other since she traveling with Sess now? And what about Kag? Of course as always I'll be here to read....

update soon

I really liked this chapter, would have reviewed sooner but my computer's being refraged, and I had to get on someone elses. Anyway, poor Inu....not! hahaha. Hopefully, I'llve mve mine back here by tonight so that I will be able to keep up with new stuff....looking forward to seeing what you come up with....

Ha! Caught you this time. Hiten! You kind of want to hate him for doing that, but then he also saw all that Sess had put her through, and loving someone makes you do some 'bad' things. Good that Sess is taking her away... when he's alone,doesdoes his best!