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I love this story!!!!!!....I'll probably cry with it comes to a end.......Update soon.......

hey why do you not continue your story?
it is great and really sexy!
so please Update soon!

Welcome back! We missed you! love your fan fiction. It's one of my favorites. I recommend it too lol. Good chapter, love your writing style :) Ja~

HA! Really liked the thought of that ending of the chapter! Not going to be a good flight! It's not so much as what is going to happen or what will happen as much as ima image of Sess expression and thought of it. I've been watching but you slipped 46 past me and jumped to 47. Something told me to come back here and check. Can't wait to see the finished results of the change. Will it be like the picture he had of her that he looked at all the time? Well, even if not... Great job... be back to read more like always....

aaaaahhh, don't stop there. it was getting good.
nice work as always, i cannot say enough, how much i enjoy this story.
please update soon

good chappie update soon

I don't know how your chapter escaped me. I've been looking for it. Must have been where it got to another page before I got a chance to notice. Away, you've got a build-up there about him making her his now, which is good. There were two things that I had difficulty in making clear in my head. First being the leaning over the rail thing at the beginning. I just couldn't get the picture right in my head, even though I had an idea of what you were describing. The other was when she was on thble ble and you had Sess pull her to the edge, then you mention about her stepping closer to him, but she never got off the table from the way I was reading it. Still I think it's a sexy chapter and can't wait to read about him making her his!

great
finally he asked her!
took him long enough

migi

oh kami good chappys*faints* lol keep up the AWESOME WORK ! *hugs*

well i finally caught up and wow, I mean WOW! Cant wait to read more soon