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for Masterful Deception

by MarshDragon

person Ray
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHEN ARE you going to write an other chapter...............


I really like this story so pleassssssssssss!
person LadyRainStarDragon
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hope you're feeling better, i've been sick for a month now and can understand how much it sucks. update when you can! be well.
person megami
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
could you atleast end with a little waff between inu and kag, you know maybe just have them establish that they are aple ple
person Arty
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great as always Dagan, though did ya have to use a different title here? Now we have to change it on the homesite.... Great chapter.... Bad dagan...
person Arty
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great as always Dagan, though did ya have to use a different title here? Now we have to change it on the homesite.... Great chapter.... Bad dagan...
person Nefra
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Totally awesome! That is a great beginning but I am curious about something. Perhaps it's my mind not working hard enough or something. But is this gonna be an Inu/Kag or Sess/Kag? It may be a stupid question but we haven't seen much interaction between our favorite miko and hanyou. Well, hopefully you'll update soon and let those of us (me, LOL) on the slow side what's going on. Well, keep it up and don't worry, you'll get over that nasty cold. Until next time...

Ja ne!
Nefra
person enid
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh man im hooked already keep updating pleeasse!!!
person Katzztar
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, 28 hits and there is not a review yet!?
This is one story that deserves a good review too. Although there are a few selling mistakes, those are easily fixable.
The plot is wonderful and dark, I love it!
Although I'll beg for you fix the spelling mistakes, I'll beg more for the next chapter!