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by Sabichan

person Carrie
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just realized how many typos I have in my review.... ^_^;;; If you can't understand anything just ask me to explain.
person Kawool
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
To put it in a nutshell, it's AWESOME !!!!
person shaid
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are awesome. I agree with the way you did the lemons. It feels right for them to be so comfortable in their sexual relationship, even though they've been apart for so long. They're meant for each other.

And I do like the Idea of Miroku coming over and eating something that dropped on the table before inu gets a chance to clean it... hehehe, yeah. Reminds me of when I gave my former roomie, Brendan, a mattress from my parents' house (hauled all the way from Ohio to DC) 'cause he didn't have a bed. Then informed him that it was the mattress I'd lost my virginity on. He turned an odd color and mumbled something about that being just wonderful and my other roomie, the psycho-bitch and I laughed our asses off. She didn't laugh as hard though. It was also the mattress she'd slept on when visiting me in Ohio. hehehe

Please finish this soon! I want to re-read it in it's entirety! I re-read things alot, especially if they're well written with happy endings. And I love waht you're doing. I'm so happy you have Sessh with Rin. They have to be my favorite pairing, if only because she's so sweet and he's so harsh. That and there's usually an age difference and I have a thing for older men. ::grins:: obviously. My fiance is nearly a decade older than me.

But seriously, Sabichan, I am really really REALLY loveing this story. Can I print it out for easier reading when you're done? e-mail me and let me know.

Thanks for a wonderful read.

Shaid
person Soranji
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*dies* need more *falls over*
person Anon
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
which she BLUSHED profusely about

It’s good that YOU two had this time apart.

When you get TO be our age

I nearly moaned aloud as her sweet taste flooded my senses. I had dreamed about THIS for so long

There, as your evil twin, I have fixed your typos. I have learned that I am a better evil twin than I thought before. You're a hopeless romantic. Well, soI! YI! You want to be a writer. I'm trying to write a book right now. How freaky is all this shit?

The whole reunion was SO CUTE! I would make this review longer, but I really need to shave my legs (bet you all needed to know that) and wash my hair so I can straighten it. Takes me like an hour. If I didn't love my hair so much....

Yay! Lemon soon! WAI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Carrie
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to put my name on the last one -_-;;;
person LadyCatBailey
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*bawls in my corner* I'm so HAPPY! They're together, and that was SO romantic! I mean...*sniffles into a tissue* So sweet. So incredibly sweet, I can't even discribe how happy I was when he saw her. And I was flipping cracking up when The Momma's were telling Kagome about sex....BWHAHAHAHAHAHA....

The bad thing is...I've had that talk. XD XD It was so not right! It scarred me for life! LOL

RIn freaking rox. I luff Rin. She MUST have a baby damnit! *sniffles*

I can't wait till tonight...we get...LEMON....*cackles madly and bounces like a rabid hamster* LEMON LEMON LEMON! YEEEES...I'm so weird. I need a life. LOL

Much Love,
Cat
person Carrie
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, dude I just read CatBailey review. That's nothing. I had a dream a few monbackback where I had SEX with Inuyasha. If not for the part in the end where he changed into someone I will not speak the name of, it would have been perfect. Damn my subconscience. >_<
person Soranji
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*dances* ok I have stopped exploding
person Soranji
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I lied *explodes*

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