AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for A Bus Stoirytirytale

by Sabichan

person ~A~
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is such a good fanfiction I'm sad it's ending, but I'm looking forward to another wonderful story by you soon. You're a wonderful writer, this is a great fic, and I can't wait for you to write more. Thanks! ^_^
person ladykaa28
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sad that it ended, but happy thay everyone got back together.
person TheDreamMeIsReal
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sighs happily* Your fic is one of my favorites. I think you write beautifully. My goodness you've made me cry more than I ever have reading any fic. Wait... actually your fic is the only one that has made me cry O.o Like a baby I might add. Your story means so much to me because I've had my heart utterly broken and then put back together too. It really does feel like you're dying. The way you described what Inuyasha was thinking and going through was very close to my own experience so I congratulate you on portraying it so realistically. Heh... but I still couldn't imagine him holding that pain for a year... yowie he is strong. Usually I don't like it when stories aren't inrd prd person but you do first person so well that I absolutely love it. I especially like Inuyasha's POV -- you're right in saying that he seems to tell the story best. But the occaisonal Kagome or other character POV is really nice too, and make the story really rounded. I'm so happy to have found such a wonderful fic as yours. Never stop writing cause you've got talent.
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ei, Sabi c it\ it's me again. I just finished reading this wonderful story of yours, and I want you to know that I was really amazed. I never really liked those AU fics, but oncreadread this one, it made me change my mind. :D Great story, the characters are refreshing, always full of surprises (you pulled a lot in this one! hehehe) and a beautiful way of interpreting it. Plus, it's kinda cute and makes me feel smug that Inuyasha was the one to wait this time... so keep up the good work, hope you finish this one soon so that you can start another one fast. Yay! looking forward to more. nd gnd good luck
person CybrEmly01
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Total bummer Sabichan. A similar thing happened to me just a week or so ago. Had to reboot the
entire system. I have nothing left. *stomps foot in indignation* And I had almost the entire first
and second seasons of Slayers! on the hard drive.

*muttering* Dam*ed computer problems.

Yeah, Bathroy's fic is fantabulous. And I saw where it was dedicated to you. One of these days I'm
going to start a "Mutual Appreciation Society" for authors and reviewers. We all just have so much
affection for each other.

Anyways, don't blow a fuse in your eagerness to wrap up this fic. We want you 'firing on all cylinders' so
we can get more and more fics from you. Y'know, alive & healthy so we can bully you into entertaining
us.

Ja,
CybrEmly
person Soranji
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I want to be on the update list. My e-mail addy is: soranjichan@soranjihime.net

*cries* I hate viruses.. They suck.
person trinity
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sorry to hear that, weez all luv's you (GREAT BIG, BIG, BIG, HUG) i know me and all the other peep's who love your story understand that it will take sometime, so relax take a big breathe and let those wonderful creative juices flow, you haven't disappointed me and i'm quite sure anyone else!! and if anyone says differently then i'll curse them for all eternity to have REALLY REALLY AND I MEAN REALLY BAD TOE JAM!!EEEW!! so come on and give me a smile....come on...come on...there i knew you could do it!! happly waiting for your next chap(s) trinity.
person kettricken
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sabichan, I'm so sorry. I know how it feels to lose a story that way--it's never quite the same when you rewrite it. =( I pine for you. I'll be waiting for you to continue, though--as patiently as possible, although that may not really BE all that patient... I know I haven't reviewed in awhile, but I HAVE been readiso pso promptly that I sometimes get to the list on AFF, see that your story isn't at the top with the updates, and just leave it up, refreshing the page every few minutes. Sad, aren't I? =)

Meanwhile, I took your advice and read Rider on a Pale Horse in its entirety. Thank you, thank you, you are now officially one of my heroes! I would've missed out on a great story if you hadn't pointed it out. Course...that doesn't mean I'm not still anxious for my Bus Stop. =7 Best of luck with this story--we're cheering for you!
person shaid
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh Sabichan!!! ::hugs:: I know exactly how you feel. When I was 15, I started work on a story and had it all saved on 3 and 1/4 inch floppies. My father decided to be nice and back up all my disks and inadvertantly copied over my 90 page masterpeice as well as 5 other 40 page works of art and nearly 100 poems that I'd written. I was devastated. And I never finished any of them.

I'm so glad you will be finishing this, though. What I've read of your work is amazing and I hope to be a devotee of your novels someday. Keep writing, please. I can't tell you how much I've loved what you've written. ope ope someday I have the courage to post my fics here. And thank you for waht you already have written. I've gained new perspective on things through it.

faithfully,

Shaid
person Carrie
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh sweetheart, take all the time you need. You do know that as your evil twin if I ever find out who this fucker is that I will kill him...okay maybe I'll just maim him a bit, how's that? I should proabaly go save stuff on disks now...I'm just like you. I never back shit up. I'm so lazy, but I think I will take all the email addresses out of my address book. Goddamnit this sucks. *hugs* Feel better and don't worry about making people wait. They understand.

Ja Ne

P.S. that mutant lemon thi.sou.sounds good XD