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by Sabichan

schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Guess who? Seriously if you don't know who this is right off the bat, you got some problems girl. ^_^

First I would like to get this out of my system and say: Awwwwwww!

That was the cutest thing I think I have ever read. The Mega Mutent Lemon rocked! It was full of Waffy goodness and smut. Great combination. I have been meaning to ask you, if you ever read any book by Lori Foster. I was reading Say No to Joe? and this one part of the book just kind of reminded me of the first lemon you wrote for Inu and Kag. Joe Winston (he is now one of my favorite characters from a book, ever and he makes appearances in three of her book) said "Come for me, Luna." when he was having sex with the woman he ended up marring for the first time. I read that and automatically thought of this fic. If you haven't read any of her books, I highly suggest them. She is an amazingly, gifted writer. I finished two of her books already, am reading two more and have three waiting to be read yet. Shannon McKena is very good, too. The two of them wrote a few books together with another author.

I have to go read the Epilouge so I'll review again. ^_^
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"Even though I can't play anything or sing worth shit, I have a passion for music that fuels everything I do." I'm like that, too. Well, I can technically play clarinet, but I suck. And my singing? Woo, don't get me started. Music is a big part of my life though. I am constatly listening to something, except when I sleep. ^^ I have been influence by so many songs and gotten so many ideas for fics, it's ridiculous.

I am sad to see this fic over, as as they say (whoever they are) "All good things must come to an end." And this, I know, is in no way the last good thing that you will write. They had a little boy! I know you're not supposed to care. People always say you should just want your baby to be healthy, but that's kind of a given seeing as no one in their right mind will say, "I want my baby to be diseased." When I have kids, and seeing as how things are going in my love life or lack there of will be a while (good thing. So not ready for kids yet), I want a boy. Not that I'd love a girl any less or anything, but I want a boy.

Oh, I was talking to one of the people I work with who goes to school in Boston. She was here for Spring Break and shid sid she was going to take pictures of all the things about Philly she misses. Do you miss Wawa? I thit mit might just be a Pennsylvania thing (someone corrct me if I am wrong). Wawa rocks. If anyone doesn't know what a Wawa is, just think of a 7 Eleven, but better. They have asome coffee. ^^

I think I have rambled enough and I have fics to wrind pnd posts on Gaia to make so hope to see a new fic from you soon! Can't wait.
person Ickabod119
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! You have blessed us readers with an unbelievable story!!! I hope you post more stories for us to read ALL HAIL THE GREAT SABICHAN!!!
person No One Knows
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! I can't be over!! I don't want it to be over!! That was the best fucking story ever written!! Hell, it's better then most books I've ever read! SO AWESOME!! I loved it! You should take this story down, make up your own characters, and publish this. I'd pay 20 bucks to read it, hell I'd pay 100 bucks to read it! Well if you don’t publish this one, tell me wheu dou do publish your first awesome novel. This story was just fan-freaking-tastic.
person Sera
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
--sigh---
what can I say?
Et tht that this peice of writing is just perfect in any sense.
I'm so out of words at the moment, I just can't express what i want to say (not even in my mother tongue;)))
I must have read 1000s of fanfiction in at least 3 or 4 fandoms and I never ever read something that touched me so deeeply.
I feel like this story speaks directly to me...
...sorry if I'm babbling, I'm just SO touched at the moment.
With your permission, I'd like to that this piece to the copyshop and make a hard copy --just one for my self, so that I can read it over and over.
This is not only the BEST Inuyasha fanfic I ever read, it's one of the best fanfics I read ever.
I'm really really sad it's over now, but I wont beg for a sequel...just because I feel this perfect story is finished. It has come full circle (can you even say this in english??;)
I hope I'm making sense here....;)
Just let me tell you I'm amazed by this story.
Please keep on writing, I really really can't wait for more.
all the best
sera
person drake220
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh
wah........................
i'm not ready to let go yet!!! i really really REALLY think you should post this on ff.net. oh, this is the best story ever. most wonderful and poignant story EVER. i loved it. i got sucha kick reading it. do you know i've actually reread this story? yes, i have adn thats how good it as. you absolutely MUST post another story though i really dont know how it will surpass this one. parting is such sweet sorrow but the going was good and all good things must come to an end. now that i've exhausted my repetiore of cheesy trite sayings, i'll leave you with this:
THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS FIC!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU ARE A REASON FOR WHY SITES LIKE THIS WERE INVENTED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Shaid
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::sniffsniff:: sabichan, you are amazing... What a sweet proposal! ::sighs:: and what a sweet chapter...

I'm sad it's ending, but god is it a happy ending. Thank you, thank you, thank you for your hard work and incredible imagination. I have enjoyed this story so much!
person ladykaa28
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was worth the wait. I was wondering how you were going to bring the couples together now that everyone was back. Well this should be a wedding to remember.
person DRAKE220
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
inu loves kag and sess loves rin and miroku loves sango and I LOVE YOU SABI CHAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(in a purely platonic way so you dont freak out)- you are amazing, this fic blows my mind!!! og, god i am literally crying when inu proposed. I was all 'AHHHHHHH!!!! YES YES!!!!' then i came to and realized that i had to read ke sae say yes. it was a nerve wracking second. BUt this fic is such a sheer pleasure to read. so well worded and well written adn fabulous and you have mega mutant lemons!!!!!!!!! i mean, CAN it get any better? HELL NO! though i would be impressed if your stories did get better. i am so upset this fic is over. it was probally one of my fav stories ever to read. I'm doing advertisments for this fic on other sites b/c anyone who does not read it is missing out.
about that mega mutant lemon- wow. it was overall fabulous,l hot, steamy, poignant, cute, meaningful ect. but nothing NOTHING beat miroku's "my angel of afterglow." i laughed hysterically when i read that. it was brilliance, plain and simple. Miroku was GREAT, plain adn simple. His character is.........so.........WHAM on target, y'know? mind boggling how you accomplished that. I abase myself before you adn this fic. praise you! please put up the other fic soon. i'm gonna need my sabichan fix soon. oh crap there i go sounding like a stalker again. ::sighs:: sorry 'bout that. LOVE LOVE LOVE this fic
person Soranji
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*cries* one chapter left