rate_review Reviews

WAH!!! I'm so sad that it's over!!! This is such a great story. I really loved your use of lyrics...especially "Bus Stop". Very clever. The smut wasn't smut:-) It was tasteful:-) I really, really, really liked it. REALLY!!!

Wow...






Just wow. It took me over three days to read this... every spare moment I had was spent staring at a computer screen, greedily taking in your wonderful story. I haven't slept more than an hour in the past 48 hours, and I blame it all on you... and your magnificent way of bringing the reader right into the story.

Thank you so much for sharing this with us humble readers. I only hope that my own story can be half as good and half as loved as yours is.

Thank you again, I look forward to reading more of your work.

Jennifer

Well, by all means, strike out on your own and promote it shamelessly.

But I don't see the point of taking a finished story and making it origional as being very sensible. You will have to rewrite so much to explain where you are even coming from....Just start a new, origional story, let all previous reveiwers know and we will read. I will, anyway.

By the by, your lemons are awesome. Not physically possible, but awesome. Been there, done that! Breaks furniturerns rns out to be astoundindgly uncomfortable or the wrong position described for results. But at least you don't appear to be asking your audience to grow an extra vertebra or arm or so. (my personal favs,!!) My vote *****!

One negative: lose the towel. Put down tarps if you want to get that goofy, do the laundry at some point. Towels make me think of saving the sheets for multiple partners or illicit sex. *Sigh*, no I never did any such thing but I have good reason to know...you are indicating something you don't mean.

Geez...what weird post...

*crying* there will be a sequel right? I need more. This got me through the semester knowing I had a great story to read. I will miss it. I loved this story. It was and is one of the best I have read in a long time. Its up there with 'Turnabout is Fair Play' and my favorite author and friend, animechick262003. I reallpe ape after a rest you write some more. I don't know if I can function without a chapter of something from you.. And I promise you write a new story and I'll explode on a daily basis. lol ok bye bye now.

Okay, I sat down to read this a little while ago because I noticed that it was complete, and it was about time to actually read a whole story. :) So thank you for that to start.

Now, I must add, that you have the greatest sense of humor. I love all your little one liners, and since you commented about how Bill and Johnnie really took place in your life it makes it even more iestiesting imagining this story.

You really let some guy braid your hair on a bus? That's insane lmao, I commend you for that tehehe.

Anyway, I am going back to your story now, as I am addicted. :)

This is truely a great story! I loved every minute of it. I loved the whole idea of it based off that song and this story made me feel so much. I really think you have a real talent there and I hope to see more stories from you in the future. Thanks for the experience!!!

Hi there, I haven't read much of your stoy yet, just part of the first prolouge with Inuyasha's interaction to Kikyo. But I looked at the song you used "Sic Transit Gloria" and the title seemed really familar to me. Well it turns out that I heard this song for the first time last Wednesday on a local radio station, and it really spoke to me, but I couldn't figure out what it was called!

So basically, thank you for using these lyrics, I think that they fit very well with what you are writing, I hope that the rest of your story is as good as the beginning. (Don't worry, I will leave a review when I am done... I have just settled in to read the whole thing lol)

Sorry for the randomness of the review!

... what can I say? I just spent some wonderful hours reading your story, and I just had the most wonderful time in doing so! Somehow, I am really sad that the story is finished by now. But still.. yes, what I wanted to tell you: Thanks a lot for sharing the story! You're the best!

Beautiful!!! After all the heartaches and misunderstandings everyone is basically one big happy family. and the legend continues... the miko and the hanyou!

Hey, Sabi chan! Hope you still remember me. I just want to say
CONGRATS for finishing your story and WOW!!! I mean, a great
starting point, and a perfect ending. You never cease to amaze us!
Thanx for sharing this one with us, and I know the next one will be
just as wonderful-if not more so. Thanx a and and good luck! Hope
to read another one of your "patent-pending" soon! hehehe.
Love ya lots and more power!