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by Sabichan

person Inus_Kagome_Forever (I\'m not signed in)
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'd heard from my sister how great this story was, and so I knew someway other
another I'd get to finding this story and reading it, but it was quite a while before
I actually did. I found it on one of my favorite authors recomended reading so I
clicked on it and check it out. I'm still not finished reading it tho =D I'm on chapter
44 Can't wait till I finish but I thought I'd like to review just one time before I
finished. Great story. I wish I could make my chapters and story long like you did
with this one. (Dont know if you have with your other but I guess I'll check that and
them out later)

Well, Laterz, till next time
Inus_Kagome_Forever
person mrsjenthornton
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a great story i found myself getting all teary eyed or getting really mad(especially when kagome left) but i had to tell myself
self this is just a story. That is how a story is SUPPOSE TO BE. Great work girl.
JEN
person MelMuff
schedule December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Such a fanastic fic. Luv it!
person Shadiyaray
schedule November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was a very good story!!!
Oh my god! I couldn't stop reading it. I've put off preparing the dressing and Macroni and cheese to finish it.
Very good!
person Mythical Child
schedule June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Don't know if it's possible to say I fell in love even more with Inuyasha. Wow. This story is so damn cute and sweet. <3 Loved every part of it. I stayed up reading from 12 AM - 8 AM. Then had to pick it up again just couple hours ago. Super happy and also very tired-eyed now. ^-^ Great job on your story!!!
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Like WOW!!! I just spent the entire day reading this story. Damn near 12 hours glued to my screen... It's AMAZING. I love the way you ended it. But I have to say... it leaves everything open for a sequel... And to tell you the truth, I don't think a lot of people would be complaining... Anyway... I'm rambling so I'll signoff... Once again, GREAT STORY.
person akuma_river
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. What a great story. Though you did put them through hell. You never did say what happened to Kouga and Ayame and Kagura. But I guess that Kouga finally found a sadist to make him happy. And Ayame seems just like the sort of women who can beat Kouga into a good boy. Beat heh I be she used whips too. Loved the story. Keep up the good work.
person Anon
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Unfortunately, reading the last two chapters of this wonderful tale have made me late for work, so i can't detail as i would like...and i sincerely hope you can swear in reviews because if you really really want my honest opinion....That. Story. Was. Just. FUCKING. FABULOUS!!!@#$%&*#@$ ILOVEDIT.

I am nearly tempted to take a "casual day" and just reread the whole damn beautiful thing!!! Thank you so much. I really appreciate how you seem to care so much about your update speed and that you finish things and mostly that you put forth the effort to write such wonderful stuff and share it so willingly. It may sound really dumb, but Fanfiction in general really gives me alot of hope for the future of humanity. E
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
* sniffles * I loved it! Every chapter of it! It took my two nights and one afternoon to read this, but I read it all! I just can't believe all the little twist and turns you put in this and not getting lost in the P.O.V's. It was sure different, I can tell you that. I just have one thing though...What made you decide to write through P.O.V's? Not that I am complaining, just wondering is all...Anyhoo, I am sure glad that Kouga wasn't involved in the rest of the fic after Kagome left Inuyasha...( I kinda teared up at that ), plus I was surprised that Kagome neventientioned that little fib to get those truckers away from her, I don't think Inuyasha would have freaked out too much. I actually thought it was damn funny the way those guys reacted...And then the way Kagome left them with the check and all...That had cojones!

Anyhoo, this was a very good story told from all prespectives, from Inuyasha, Kagome, her mother, and a bit from everyone elses too. It was simply wonderful! Well I am going to take a peek at your other storie too...Later! ^_^
person KagoKitty
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
SABI-CHAN!!!
I'm crying over here! Mind throwin' the tissues my way?? Thanks...
What can I say besides...WOW.
Yes, wow...wonderful storyline, creative patent pending names, beautiful description...everything I love in my stories!! And it's AU to boot!! *giggle* Wow, I know your probably thinkin' like, "What the hell? This chick is totally too late to be reviewing..."
But I have a HUGE schedule. *gomen gomen gomen* Since I was using sick hours...I decided to use them on somethin' good...like some fanfic reading!! I found and read this in 3 whole days!! *puffs up in pride* And I just CAN NOT wait to read your other fantastic stories. I love that lil' brain of yours, ya know...may be exactly what you need one day...
Oh, and don't feel so bad about only knowing oldies for some while...*sweatdrop*...I'm so sad in the same sense that I was actually SINGING ALONG with all the lyrics. heheheh...yeah.
Hope to see ya around soon!!
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