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for A Bus Stoirytirytale

by Sabichan

person Carrie
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*points finger at you* You sneaky bitch. You are purposly using my imense curiosity against me to get me to keep reading. Aren't you? Aren't you!?


*giggles* Okay, I don't mind that much. I would keep reading it anyway. Cliffy or no. I love the way you are portraying that characters, Inuyasha especially. He comes off so muchter ter in certain stories when he's OOC. I'm doing something similar in one of my fics. If people don't like how vulnerable I am making him, they can kiss my ass ^_^ I love the thing you did with Kagome when she threatened to pour Inuyasha's coffee down his pants with a smile on her face. I do that alot. My friends find it hilarious that I can threaten someone or something and sound so chipper. Great fun. Can't wait 'til next chapter. Review you tomorrow XD
person ME
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Perfect!! such Inu and Kagome fun---sweet^_^ looking forward to the next!!!
person Soranji
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it update soon
person Ickabod119
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful A/U you got me totally hooked to this one can't wait for more!!!
person Soranji
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwww inu's so nice to him mother. I feel so sorry for her.
person Soranji
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
do you have the whole story written out? this chapter was very good. I canwaitwait till Inuyasha and Kagome go out
person Soranji
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*body explodes* sorry i can;t handle cliffies..
person kettricken
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's really sad, you you made my whole day by updating so soon. =) I love your story, and I don't care at all if people are OOC as long as Inuyasha k on on being such a sweetheart...awww...
person RavenShadow
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I so love this story so far!!! The dialog is great!!! I just wanted to tell you how well written it is and I can't wait for the next chapter!
person kettricken
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey there, I just read the first few chapters of your story, and I just wanted to say that I'm really interested. Way to hook the readers! =) I liked your portrayal of the characters in the somewhat-AU...they were all believable, especially Kouga, even though I do like his character in the series. Hope you update soon!

PS Please tell me die did NOT lose his father's umbrella! Please?!

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