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by Sabichan

person Carrie
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!

I only got to read like half of that chapter before I had to leave for classes. Do you even realize how much ass that sucked? I was seriously considering comeing home early just so I could finish reading, but I thought my mom would yell at me ('cause I still live at home 'cause I'm too poor to move out), but when I got home I found out that I could have come home early because SHE'S NOT HOME! I hate my life sometimes. -_-

Anywho, That was so Kawaii...the kiss and stuff not the thing at the end where Miroku yelled "OH SHIT!" and sped off. *sigh* Okay...going to go read the other chapters so I don't go crazy.

Oh wait....too late. I forgot. I already am. XD
person shaid
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for putting that little sango-miroku goodness in. I do love them as a couple. The only couple I love more is Sessh and Rin. Which considering their ages in the story is so wrong it's sick, but hey, my finace is 10 years older tme ame and I like the older guy thing. OH!! speaking of Sessh and Rin... Do you have any intention of using them in the story at all?? Please say yes....

and another thing... Didn't Inu say he hadn't even told Miroku about Kikyo? And how the hell is Inu gonna get himself out of this?? I mean, it's not really his fault, but DAMN, that was really the worst time for that to happen. I want to see a happily ever after here. I'd also like to find out waht really happened to Inu's dad. Do you know yet? Did Naraku really kill him? Will Kouga suddenly deveolp a phobia of anything white, like Inu's hair, and have to be sent to an institution run by a maniacal Hitten where he will become Manten's "bitch?"

ok. I'm not a kouga fan. And I'm now rambling because it's 3 am here and I've been up since... wait, I slept in this morning, nevermind... But I'm enjoying and consequently telling my fiance all about it and boring him to tears. He just has no clue as to why IY is so popular.
person Kawool
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD !
I've just discovereis sis story....
It is ABSOLUTELY AWESOME!!!
One of the greatest Inu/Kag fic I've ever read !!!
Oh and the plot is so exciting !!! No wonder I added you to my fav authors list ^o^
Oh and some chappies remind me so much of my own life...It's fu*king amazing !!!
To put it in a nutshell, I L O V E Y O U R F I C ! Woohoo!!!
I'm glad you finally post it on AFF, please update ASAP n keep up the good work ;)
Huggles
Kawool
(sorry probably murdered the spelling but first it isn't my 1st language, it's 4.00am and i'm too lazy to re-read it LOL)
person Shaid
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sabichan you are so evil, throwing Kikyou in there! I knew you would. You had to. But it still makes me want to rip the bitch's hair out.

I am really loving this story! I wasn't sure I would, just reading the description, but wow. I mean Really WOW. I look forward to reading it. Can you e-mail me when there are updates??? Please please please?

Merci!!!

Shaid
person Carrie
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's about fucking time! I thought my friends were going to shot me yesterday because I kept whinning that the chapters weren't up! so so pathetic. >_> I was going crazy because A FANFICTION WAS NOT UPDATED! Is that normal? That can't be normal. I think I'm just a very obsessive peerson or something. *shrugs* Whatever.

I so didn't think the last few chapters were filler. I liked them. They were neccisary (I spelled that wrong didn't I? It looks wrong to me...) and shit. And of course I love you! This fic has sucked me in and won't let me go. I think I might cry when it's over, which I hope wonbe fbe for a very, VERY long time. ^_^ Okay well I'm going to go read the other chapters. Expect another review. Hell maybe I'll even leave two more. Who know.
person Carrie
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I FUCKING KNEW IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I knew it! As soon as Kagome started talking about her aunt I knew it was Kikyo! OMG you evil evil person. *laughs* This is one hell of a plot twist. *screams* OMG OMG OMG! This just keeps getting better and better. *squeals and goes to read next chapter*
person Carrie
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I will not dissagree with that. You are indeed one evil person, but hey, everyone wouldn't be reading this story if they cared, now would they? I know I don't care. I have kno known on occasion to be quite evil myself.

This one time to get back at this guy who was being a dick to my friends I made a SN and pretended I saw him at one of his hockey games and decided I had to talk to him. I kept it going for like a month or something. Every morning I would come into school with the convo that I had with him and me and my friends would either read it before homeroom or at lunch and just laugh our asses off. When I finally told him, damn. Priceless is all I cay. Iy. It was priceless. A couple days after I told him, his skank of the week IMed me and kept calling me a cunt so I made fun or her and then the asshole IMed me and told me to stop upsetting his girlfriend. Pfft, she brought it on herself. I'm SO getting off topic, but you did say you like rambling so whatev'

Anyway, THIS STORY ROCKS! While I don't see myself blowing up anytime in theure,ure, I do jump up and down alot in my seat while I'm reading! Please oh please email me when you update. It will stop me from going to this site like every hour checking to see if you updated. I am such a pathetic loser. lol I really should go start trying to update my fics before people on ff/net start killing me. I already had one person threaten torture and another say they would stalk me. People these days they will do anything to- UPDATE OR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN- to get someone to give then what they want ^_^ Bye Bye
person drake220
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
EVIL? EVIL DOESN"T BEGIN TO DESCRIBE YOU!!!!!!! i cannot believe you did that to them! stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid moronic idiotic horrid terrible disgusting perverted annoying STUPID KIKYO! i just want to yell at her "Hey you- Ho Bag! GO BACK UNDER THAT ROCK FROM WHENCE YOU CAME!!!" seriously, i'm not a kikyo hater, i think she's a very poignant character but this was unexcusable! i mean, LET GO woman. the kicker was that after she figures out who inu is to her own neice, THEN she makes her move! i was yelling at the screen of my computer (i'm not joking. thank god noone was home. it would have been......embarrassing) "oooooohhh bitch you did NOT just do that! GET OFF HIM! NOW!!!"
ahem
now that that little rant is done, all i can say is that these chapters are great! absolutely amazing! inu kicking kouga's ass= YAY!! such a great scene! and the b-day party was ame ame adn so comfortable. youldould see the relaxastion, feel how happy they all were. adn the day off was funny adn perfect. but the crowning achievement was definitly the sad inu chapter, the last line especially. i mean, it really got to me. i was all faklempt if you know what i mean.
one question: why the hell is shiori liking naraku? ewww- he knocked off her husband! and if she does get with him (::shudders::) then i want to see the evidence naraku found that inu's dad and kagura ran away togather! and it hadbetter be pretty damn convincing. that's all
KUDOS TO YOU FOR AWESOME WRITING!!!! i give you.......an entire plate of krispy kreme for your consumptive pleasure! enjoy!
person ME
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You ARE so evil!!!! Ack!!....cliffie.......killing....me.....DAMN KIKYOU---fucking slut--DIE!!!!!! okay, normally I'm not into Kikyou bashing, and I really don't think she's an evil character in general, but..........WHAT THE HELL IS THAT BITCH THINKING!!!!!!!!!!! man, you've made me not like her^_^ *breathe in, breathe out* I'm fine--REALLY!!! no, I mean...really^_O
person Carrie
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Are you fucking trying to make me cry? I'm not yet, but keep it going like this and you just might have me in tears. I bought a book called P.S. I love you and I shit you not I cried straight through the first 6 chapters. It's kind of embarrasing >_> Oh well, damn I cannot tell you how much I am in love with the fic. Seeing that you updated, as pathetic as thins sounds, make my da. I almost start jumping up and down with joy. Happy, happy, joy, joy. Happy, happy, joy, joy. Happy, hap-

O_O Okay I'm done now. No one needs to hear my shitty singing. And *raises can of cherry coke* Here, here! Our jobs suck! I really thought I was going to kill someone today. Everyone kept asking me where stuff was. It's like wearing that damn name tag lights up this sign that everyone but you can see that say "Information Booth" *sigh* It's annoying. Name tags themselves are just plain evil. Letting people you don't know see what your name is. Who thought up that dumb ass idea? I hate it when people walk up to me and start calling me by my name when they don't know who I am.

I'm getting really off topic...wait, was there a topic? Oh yeah! You trying to make me cry. ^_^ Yay for your time off work! More updates! *does happy dance* XD I think I have rambled enough for one day. Review you later! *waves*