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February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. Ooh! OK! What a chapter!!!
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February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So Naraku's good? I'm happy then.I wanted Inu's mom t be happy. I'm glad Sesshy came back and I'm very happy you included Rin. I can't wait to see what you have in store for us. ^_^
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February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
gotta be honest, i knew that sessy-chan was coming back adn rich as king midas (b/c in all honesty does anyone ever see sessy as poor?? no, i thought not) but that he found the father i wasnt expecting. i was expecting inu to find him. adn kag leaving is a bit of a shock. But i loved the relationship between kikyo adn kagome. kikyo is a very mature person in the manga/show/wahtever medium you choose and, once she knows shes wrong, i think she reacted very believablely. great chapters!
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February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ok i exploded on chapter 26 now again on *ex *explodes*
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February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*dies*
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February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*pieces self back together* im good now lol
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February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I only have one question...
WHAT THE FUCK IS GOING TO HAPPEN WITH NARAKU AND SHIORI NOW THAT SESSHOUMARU FOUND SHOJI!?
*clears throat* Okay. not that that's out of the way....AHHHHHHHHH! ^_^ I love this fic more now if that possible. It just keeps getting better and better. I ALMOST cried on during that one chapter where Inuyasha decides he want to kill himself. That's just so damn sad. Suicide depresses me...which it should because it's a depressing thing. While on the topic of death, I saw two damn funeral processions this week waiting for the bus on my way home (why can't I meet a Bishie at the bus stop? All I seem to meet are social rejects and stalkers. He doesn't even need to be that cute, just semi-normal). I have come to abhore (cool word) those stupid little flags or stickers that they put on the cars. I'm going to put something in my will that says "No little flags or stickers on the cars in the funeral procession, under penalty of haunting." That would be funny. Imagine hte lawyers face when I say I want to put that in there. lol
Oh, I have a funny story. It shows just how whitty my memory is. now, my sister is 2 and 1/2 years older than me so I have literally known her since I was born. Well, she'd not home alot (even more so not that she moved into a dorm) so I dont' see her alot. One day I was in the kitchen and looked out the window and saw her parking the car in the driveway. I went back into the living room and turned to my dad after I sat down and said "What's-her-face is home." I completley blanked on her name. How sad iat. at. I forgot my sisters name. I mean I forget her birthday alot, but her NAME!? Now everytime my sister comes home my dad says "What's-her-face is home" to make fun of me. It really kind of funny.
Now that my random s is is over. Can't wait for the next chapter....really I can't!
O_O I'm so serious about that. I really can't!
WHAT THE FUCK IS GOING TO HAPPEN WITH NARAKU AND SHIORI NOW THAT SESSHOUMARU FOUND SHOJI!?
*clears throat* Okay. not that that's out of the way....AHHHHHHHHH! ^_^ I love this fic more now if that possible. It just keeps getting better and better. I ALMOST cried on during that one chapter where Inuyasha decides he want to kill himself. That's just so damn sad. Suicide depresses me...which it should because it's a depressing thing. While on the topic of death, I saw two damn funeral processions this week waiting for the bus on my way home (why can't I meet a Bishie at the bus stop? All I seem to meet are social rejects and stalkers. He doesn't even need to be that cute, just semi-normal). I have come to abhore (cool word) those stupid little flags or stickers that they put on the cars. I'm going to put something in my will that says "No little flags or stickers on the cars in the funeral procession, under penalty of haunting." That would be funny. Imagine hte lawyers face when I say I want to put that in there. lol
Oh, I have a funny story. It shows just how whitty my memory is. now, my sister is 2 and 1/2 years older than me so I have literally known her since I was born. Well, she'd not home alot (even more so not that she moved into a dorm) so I dont' see her alot. One day I was in the kitchen and looked out the window and saw her parking the car in the driveway. I went back into the living room and turned to my dad after I sat down and said "What's-her-face is home." I completley blanked on her name. How sad iat. at. I forgot my sisters name. I mean I forget her birthday alot, but her NAME!? Now everytime my sister comes home my dad says "What's-her-face is home" to make fun of me. It really kind of funny.
Now that my random s is is over. Can't wait for the next chapter....really I can't!
O_O I'm so serious about that. I really can't!
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February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, Okay. I know you are probably sick of hearing from me, but I forgot something. I noticed in the chapter where Inu was telling Kagome about the "incident" with Kikyo that he said he was seventeen, but in the rest of the story and even right before that he said he was sixteen. Just thought I'd point that out. I know if I did that I would want to know, so I'm extending the same curtesy..
Oh yeah and also I hate Kikyo, if I didnt' say that before. I'm glad- I probably shouldn't sh tsh that snetence. I don't know how far into the series you have seen and don't want to ruin anything, but if you don't care ask me to finish my sentence and I will. ^_^
Oh yeah and also I hate Kikyo, if I didnt' say that before. I'm glad- I probably shouldn't sh tsh that snetence. I don't know how far into the series you have seen and don't want to ruin anything, but if you don't care ask me to finish my sentence and I will. ^_^
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February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
1. This fanfic ist f!cking perfect. period.
2. I LOVE all of it. Your amazing talent, the pace, the emotions you can stir up... everything fits together perfectly. Either your EXTREMELY talented or you have spent years just writing this. trust me, everybody sees the effort you're making. Just...wow!
3. I wanted to stomp my feet like a spoiled bart when i heard you wanted to do less updates e-wre-write something. NOOOOO!!! However, I respect your perfectism (does this word even exsist??) It's what makes this story so special.
4. This whole thing is HEARTBREAKING! Every single character is utterly believable. You give so much insight in their heads, you can totally understand what's going on/ why someone makes certain decisions...One the one had, i wanted to shake some sense in Kagome to SEE who she is pushing away....one the other hand, i can somehow understand her. The only person I don't really know what to think of if Naraku. Is he good? Bad? In between? (and, one TINY bit of critisim...really teeny-tiny:) I don't believe he wouldn't interfere if Inuyasha threatens Kouga again....After all, he's Kouga's dad. I can understand that Naraku feels helpless, and ashamed, ang angry. but he loves his son, doesn't he?
But i love love love your story!!:))) I'm had a cracking smile on my face when Sess returned. Ya-HOOO! Can't wait what his story will be!!
All the best!
Sera
2. I LOVE all of it. Your amazing talent, the pace, the emotions you can stir up... everything fits together perfectly. Either your EXTREMELY talented or you have spent years just writing this. trust me, everybody sees the effort you're making. Just...wow!
3. I wanted to stomp my feet like a spoiled bart when i heard you wanted to do less updates e-wre-write something. NOOOOO!!! However, I respect your perfectism (does this word even exsist??) It's what makes this story so special.
4. This whole thing is HEARTBREAKING! Every single character is utterly believable. You give so much insight in their heads, you can totally understand what's going on/ why someone makes certain decisions...One the one had, i wanted to shake some sense in Kagome to SEE who she is pushing away....one the other hand, i can somehow understand her. The only person I don't really know what to think of if Naraku. Is he good? Bad? In between? (and, one TINY bit of critisim...really teeny-tiny:) I don't believe he wouldn't interfere if Inuyasha threatens Kouga again....After all, he's Kouga's dad. I can understand that Naraku feels helpless, and ashamed, ang angry. but he loves his son, doesn't he?
But i love love love your story!!:))) I'm had a cracking smile on my face when Sess returned. Ya-HOOO! Can't wait what his story will be!!
All the best!
Sera
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February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
I usually don't review much, but I just couldn't help myself... I love this fic!!!!!!!!!!! I cried my heart out in these last few chapters (it was sooo sad when Sango handed the jewel back to Inuyasha *snif*). This fic is amazing, one of the few that I've read so far that actually makes sense, I mean you can really see why the characters react the way they do. Well, I actually had alot to say may it kind of slipped my mind now... anyway, I love the fic, and think you are an amazing writer. This story is turning out to be a real work of art :) Oh, by the way, could you e-mail me so I could know when you are going to update??? I really can't wait to find out what will happen next :) Thx
Oh, and bringing back Sesshomaru now -> genius!!!!
Love, Eyes of Chaos :) I really love this fic (in case you haven't noticed ;) )
I usually don't review much, but I just couldn't help myself... I love this fic!!!!!!!!!!! I cried my heart out in these last few chapters (it was sooo sad when Sango handed the jewel back to Inuyasha *snif*). This fic is amazing, one of the few that I've read so far that actually makes sense, I mean you can really see why the characters react the way they do. Well, I actually had alot to say may it kind of slipped my mind now... anyway, I love the fic, and think you are an amazing writer. This story is turning out to be a real work of art :) Oh, by the way, could you e-mail me so I could know when you are going to update??? I really can't wait to find out what will happen next :) Thx
Oh, and bringing back Sesshomaru now -> genius!!!!
Love, Eyes of Chaos :) I really love this fic (in case you haven't noticed ;) )