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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am in love with your story! As soon as I think I know where the plot is heading you do a 180 on me and I love, love it bad. I know you said you liked happy endings so I'm waiting for the Inuyasha and Kagome lemon chapter!! Don't keep us waiting to long! :)
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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That's to fix the typo in my last review. ^_^;; I always do that. Maybe it's like a Feuadian (That's not spelled right, is it?) slip or something. *shrugs*
Oh and thanks a bunch to whoever it was that found it funny (took me less than a minute to forget. Jesus, you'd think I was 80 instead of 19 X_x;;) that I can't type at one o'clock in the morning. Makes me feel so much better. I said I knew grammer, not how to spell. (Please note sarcasm. It is meant to be funny. After all who can you laugh at if not yourself?) That was one thing from grade school that never stuck. I actually failed a spelling test once. That had to be the low point of 4th grade beside when I tripped in the hall way and my skirt flew up and everyone saw my underwear. That taught me a very valuable lesson though: Always wear shorts under your uniform. It also taught me to hate skirts. I am slowly starting to like them again. I wil say this. Even though I may have showed everyone my underwear, untentionally, atleast I never broke a window trying to get it open *coughANTHONYcough* or had a salad bag explode showering the room in lettuce (what is it with me and brining up lettuce in these reviews?).
So much for me not babbling and keeping my review short *laughs*
That's to fix the typo in my last review. ^_^;; I always do that. Maybe it's like a Feuadian (That's not spelled right, is it?) slip or something. *shrugs*
Oh and thanks a bunch to whoever it was that found it funny (took me less than a minute to forget. Jesus, you'd think I was 80 instead of 19 X_x;;) that I can't type at one o'clock in the morning. Makes me feel so much better. I said I knew grammer, not how to spell. (Please note sarcasm. It is meant to be funny. After all who can you laugh at if not yourself?) That was one thing from grade school that never stuck. I actually failed a spelling test once. That had to be the low point of 4th grade beside when I tripped in the hall way and my skirt flew up and everyone saw my underwear. That taught me a very valuable lesson though: Always wear shorts under your uniform. It also taught me to hate skirts. I am slowly starting to like them again. I wil say this. Even though I may have showed everyone my underwear, untentionally, atleast I never broke a window trying to get it open *coughANTHONYcough* or had a salad bag explode showering the room in lettuce (what is it with me and brining up lettuce in these reviews?).
So much for me not babbling and keeping my review short *laughs*
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ok, mybe its b/c i'm PMSing, maybe its the sappy song on the radio (100 years by 5forfighting) but there are tears in my eyes. oh good lord that was the most amazing chapter!!! the sweetness of the sess/rin thing was so t ant and then inu's love for kagome being so obvious adn unselfish- AH! i can't take this chapter, its too good!!!!! anyone who says that inu acted weirdshould go straight to hell b/c he acted like someone who was in true love would act. she got her wish, she had freedom, choice to make her own mistakes- he knew her, adn THATS why he's happy for her! he knows her better then anyone else adn he knows that she needs this! thus, while everyeon else is hurt that she left without a word, he's okay with it! BECAUSE HE LOVES HER!!!!!!!!! ::does a happy twirly dance:: loved it! loved it!!!!!! if i ever write anything that inspired....i dont know what i'll do, but it'll be impressive. thank you for writing that chapter!!!!!! it was SO GREAT!!!!
BTB, the kouga thing was right on! loved thao! so! so funny!!!!!! poor kouga's become a submissive! hehehehehehe!!!!!!!! whip it! whip it good!!! haha!! i am so happy that you update quickly!
(did i say that i adore this fic? just in case you didnt get it- wow! great fic!!!)
BTB, the kouga thing was right on! loved thao! so! so funny!!!!!! poor kouga's become a submissive! hehehehehehe!!!!!!!! whip it! whip it good!!! haha!! i am so happy that you update quickly!
(did i say that i adore this fic? just in case you didnt get it- wow! great fic!!!)
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
first: Rin and Sessh!!! YAY!!!!! They feel so darn RIGHT toer.
er.
Second: You made me cry. I don't usually cry at these fan fics but damn it, you made me cry. HE understand and he wants her to be happy, that's greaBut But she's not going to be happy without him. That wonderful scene where she's driving in her car and imagineing him next to her... That's going to haunt her. It's going to hurt, not having him with her. And she'll return to him... maybe not immidiately, but soon...
And he COULD go looking for her if he wanted... Naraku never said he wouldn't let Inu find her and if naraku marries Shironi, then he'll be more inclined to see to the happiness of his step-son, won't he? ok, so that's my idea. Prove me wrong?
Second: You made me cry. I don't usually cry at these fan fics but damn it, you made me cry. HE understand and he wants her to be happy, that's greaBut But she's not going to be happy without him. That wonderful scene where she's driving in her car and imagineing him next to her... That's going to haunt her. It's going to hurt, not having him with her. And she'll return to him... maybe not immidiately, but soon...
And he COULD go looking for her if he wanted... Naraku never said he wouldn't let Inu find her and if naraku marries Shironi, then he'll be more inclined to see to the happiness of his step-son, won't he? ok, so that's my idea. Prove me wrong?
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Umm...just to tell you now I sometimes tend to be a typo nazi. I do it to my friends alot, which gets annoying after a while 'caLordLord knows they make typos like crazy. I also sometimes correct people when they pronouce words wrong or speak in grammatically incorrect sentences. It was that damn Catholic school and their fucking focus on grammer. -_- Worst eight years of my life. Anyway, to get to the point, yes there is a point, in the paragraph where you are describing what Ayame is wearing, I think you missed a noun. "...a chained collar around her slim."
Now that I said that....As much as I hate Koga, Yay for him. He has himself his own little dominatrix. I never really thought Naraku was evil, I just didn't like him all that much 'til later chapter. I mean let's admit it, he was a horrible father, but...meh
Great chapters as usual. I'll read chapter 33 tomorrow after work. I really need to get to bed. It's almost 1:30 and I have to get to bed. I only have myself to blame for this though becasue I could just have not read these chapter since I got on the computer so late....hahaha not read the chapters, like that would even be an option. I can't not read.
I should have stopped reading that damn book though. I'm finished and now I have to go get another book. I am slowly collecting a library. It was a good book though. It's called "Bet Me" by someone whos name escapes me right now. It's stupid, but it kind of gave me hope that not all men are shallow assholes that want girlfriends who are a size sixes. I wouldn't have finished it if It wasn't for the train ride, half an hour each way. Just a little word of advise, if you are ever in Philadelphia and trying to find a street, pay really close attention because sometimes they FAIL TO PUT UP STREET SIGNS. I walked like 3 blocks past the street I was looking for. I fucking hate this city sometimes. If it didn't have suck good soft pretzels, cheese steaks, and Tastykakes I might consider moving ^_^ Not to mention the zoo kicks ass. I lub our zoo. The new primate house they built after the last one burnt to a crisp rules. There are these adorable little Colobus (I think I might have spelled that wrong) monkies who chase eachother around and throw lettuce all over the place....
I really need to stop the rambling a bit. I should go to bed. Even though I get to go inork ork a whole hour later (8am instead of 7am) I'm still going to be tired like I always am. So, goodnight and goodbye till next review (which will be tomorrow).
Now that I said that....As much as I hate Koga, Yay for him. He has himself his own little dominatrix. I never really thought Naraku was evil, I just didn't like him all that much 'til later chapter. I mean let's admit it, he was a horrible father, but...meh
Great chapters as usual. I'll read chapter 33 tomorrow after work. I really need to get to bed. It's almost 1:30 and I have to get to bed. I only have myself to blame for this though becasue I could just have not read these chapter since I got on the computer so late....hahaha not read the chapters, like that would even be an option. I can't not read.
I should have stopped reading that damn book though. I'm finished and now I have to go get another book. I am slowly collecting a library. It was a good book though. It's called "Bet Me" by someone whos name escapes me right now. It's stupid, but it kind of gave me hope that not all men are shallow assholes that want girlfriends who are a size sixes. I wouldn't have finished it if It wasn't for the train ride, half an hour each way. Just a little word of advise, if you are ever in Philadelphia and trying to find a street, pay really close attention because sometimes they FAIL TO PUT UP STREET SIGNS. I walked like 3 blocks past the street I was looking for. I fucking hate this city sometimes. If it didn't have suck good soft pretzels, cheese steaks, and Tastykakes I might consider moving ^_^ Not to mention the zoo kicks ass. I lub our zoo. The new primate house they built after the last one burnt to a crisp rules. There are these adorable little Colobus (I think I might have spelled that wrong) monkies who chase eachother around and throw lettuce all over the place....
I really need to stop the rambling a bit. I should go to bed. Even though I get to go inork ork a whole hour later (8am instead of 7am) I'm still going to be tired like I always am. So, goodnight and goodbye till next review (which will be tomorrow).
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*dies* I cried. But Sess and Rin *blushes* hhehehe *laughs like a mad woman*
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is completly random and has no importance at all, but I just realized how many typos are in my other reviews. I'm a typo prone typo nazi X_x;;
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February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I cannot begin to tell you how much i love this story. I'm hopin for a lemon for kag and inu, it would be nice for them to finally get together. eeek plz update soon!
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February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Apparenly I'm that one reader who's really easy to please. What happened to Shoji IS sad, but it's better than thher her two senarios I'm sure most of us thought of. Makes Naraku an ok guy, which I don't like, but hey, I'm not the one writing the story.
And Rin!!!!! YAY!!!!! ::jumps up and down and squeals happily:: I LOVE the pairing of Sessh and Rin, it's too incredibly RIGHT in my mind. Rin is a sweet innocent that counters and softens Sessh's dark evilness.
Anyway, KEEP WRITING!!!!!!
Arigato!
Shaid
And Rin!!!!! YAY!!!!! ::jumps up and down and squeals happily:: I LOVE the pairing of Sessh and Rin, it's too incredibly RIGHT in my mind. Rin is a sweet innocent that counters and softens Sessh's dark evilness.
Anyway, KEEP WRITING!!!!!!
Arigato!
Shaid
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February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
um...chapter 32 is STILL just an author's note... just fyi