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I LOVED IT!!!

I don't know if anyone has told you, but all there is for chapter 18 is 'Hope you like! *vibrates with excitement*
~Sabichan~
*I POV*
>Eleven minutes and forty-two second later'

 

I just thought I'd let you know

WHAT THE HELL HAPPEN TO CHAPTER 18?!? IT GOES FROM AS THEY'RE ABOUT TO LEAVE THE SHRINE IN 17, THERE'S ONLY A FEW WORDS IN 18, THEN THEY'RE CLIMBING THE SHRINE STEPS AGAIN IN 19! I FEEL LIKE I'VE MISSED THE ENTIRE STORY WITH 49ALL THE BUILD UP TO THE BIRTHDAY DINNER!

Hi Sabi,

I just want to say that I have read this story a couple of times on mediaminer and had it on my favorites list, but then it disappeared and I still have not been able to find it there. I was exstatic when I came across it here on AFF...I can't wait to read it again. I've been jonesing for it for a long time now...I just wanted to say keep up the great work and please let me know why this story is no longer on mediaminer. (This website doesn't had a favorites list like mediaminer so I'm afraid that I might lose you again;((.) Many hugs;-)

Raven

God I hope this gets to you. I loved your story it touch me in so many ways. Some of it relates to my own personal life. I could not stop crying,laughing or just plain old be mad. I will not lie to you I think I went through a lot of emotions reading this story. To tell you the truth I take this story to heat. Even though its fiction there was a lot of good advise that was so true. I just hope other people get something out reading this story. you really did good with the people in the story. Inu Yasha and Sesshomaru were more softer but it was still them, but in their human form and it was cool to see them get along and still at like jerks to each other. You really to good with all the characters you really brought them to life in this story. Thank you!! I just wish I could wright just as good as you do. You are right life is no fun with out love besides you can never stop true love. Thanks again for a real good story.

dat' was beautiful... and i dont ever say that to often. you have a gift, really that was beautiful and not crude like a lot of fics out there. again, really nice writing

Awesome story Sabi-chan! I probably would've reviewed earlier but I was so damned caugt up in the story I could barely do anything aside from read! So I have quite a bit to compliment you for: 1. Your portrayal of Rin. I abolutely ADORED how you made Rin. Shes so dominant and quirky and overall hilarious! and Rin/Sess pairing are my ultimate faves! *grins* MAD OBSESSION OVER HERE!!! Wh00t! Wh00t! (2. Kagome's attitude. I enjoyed many a snigger over her little 'quips'. All my female charaters are very similar to your girls; tough, funny, and with an attitude that bites! *snigger* (3. Your overall sense of simple humor. I ADORE IT!!! You are so funny and quirky in your own little way! I was laughing so hard at some of the things you wrote that my dad thought I was dying! (no joke) and your patented Sabi-chan Whoopsie-ma-daisy! Hilariousness! along with the *vibrates with excitement* ...I loved that. And of course the 'Mega Mutant Lemon' was it? Amusing me muchly! And I simply adore your lemons! Their so...humerous! Especially the ones with Inu and 'Gome! Can you say 'me ish laffs head off'? ... five times fast? ... while drinking a glass of water? ... and bouncing on a giant trampoline? ... without choking? Probably not... *smug grin* not that I could either... *blushes* ki-dae, moving on... (4. Sesshomaru. Sesshy-kun is my FAVORITE FAVORITE FAVORITE CHARACTER EVER!!! *bounces around exitedly* He is one cocky bastard isn't he? A hot, smexy cocky bastard! YUM! Sesshy...*drools* But his attitude was awesome! I don't know...but I LOVE seeing Sesshy-kun with an attitude! Rawrr! (5. The romance factor. I ADORED how romantic you made it! (I adore a lot of things don't I?) The first love thing...the trauma...the, the....... THE ENTIRE FUCKING THING!!!!!!!!! *pants* Wow...you compelled me to swear. GASP!!! Not many people have the ability to do that... I give you an overall rating of a million and two out of ten! Awesomey job Sabi-chan! I thoroughly enjoyed reading your lovely work of storyness! I would add you to my reccomended reading list...but unfortunately I haven't figured out exactly how to do that yet... *anime sweat drop* Well, as you can very well plainly see I have an obsession with leaving rather long reviews but you sure as hell deserve it! Ish must be taking ish's leave as of now but I will most certainly check out your other stories! (Especially the Sess/Rin one! *grins*) BYE BYE SABI-CHAN!!! --Judo

i love this story..! you should make a sequil! thatd be tight.. but meh.. i loved it :)

Ack, I FINALLY have an AFF Account so now I will REVIEW!! I read yoor magnificent, heart-breaking, full of damned suspense story. It was freaking awesome but I'VE BEEN SEEING IT EVERYWHERE SO I THINK FATE WANTS ME TO READ IT OVER. Since I have nothing better to do, I shall. I so totally loved your story.

Great story! It took me a LOT longer than it shoud have to finish this story because for some weird reason I
have a long time finishing good stories that are already written! ITS HORRIBLE! Although I always feel relieved
and happy when its over. Not as sad as I thought that such a GREAT story is over... I really wonder how long this story has been out tho cause my sis told me about it but that was on mediaminer.org ... Gawd, I can't
believe it, this story has been out for at least a year and a few months (only guessin from the reviews) wow.
Now I wish I had read it when it first came out and stuff! Its always fun to wait, in a way, lol. You seem to be
a really great author! I can't wait to check out your other stories but first, I wanna see your FANART! I love
fanart! Not as much as I love Inuyasha but still.

Inus_Kagome_Forever
laterz