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hey its me ,again, wow..,i just read my review and i sound like your lover, not your good friend..oh wow..didnt mean to sound like that .. love you like a sis but that is it ...i promise that i am straight ...just have strong lusty thoughts for some special gay guys in my life *wink wink I LOVE GUNDAM!* ok now that i have got the whole "sounding like your lover thang" out of the way...i will go now...plus we know that you love Johnny ..ta..talk to you later

PS to the person(s) that are sending flames to our writer friend..i have just two words for you...GO FUCK YOURSELVES...ok well three words but you get the idea......sorry M for being mean to some of your readers but they deserved it!!!!!!! o_0

Hey, Girlie,
Alas, I have been forced to come here since you gave Becca the printed copy. *Glares* Anywhore, I love the story. Pore Shessy. I have yet to tell my little sis about this because she would kill you for the abuse done to him. Suggestion (note a joking suggestion but a damn funny one if you play it right) Have Naruku try to eat the evil bitch, Kikyo (can't spell), and have him start to choke on a bone from her body and someone kill him while he is choking. It is anti-climatic and therefore not a good suggestion, but hey, I'm sick, I am allowed to say stupid shit. I should be back to school tommorrow so I can kill you then for not posting more. Damn, can't kill you until you finish the story and by then there will be no point in killing you. You tricky little biotch. You know I'm kidding. Right?
Anywho, see-ya.

I like your story because it was good reading. But, I have a major complaint. I know that you were trying to build up suspence and dramatic action, but I seriously do not think that Sesshoumaru would ever allow himself to get a beatdown like that. Especially by Naraku of all people; Naraku would never have that kind of power, even with all the jewel shards that he has. And being that Sesshoumaru can change at will intgiangiant dog demon, I highly doubt that he would be in such a situation that your story entails.

I don't think that your story sucks, but it just seems off.

Wow! I'm not sure what I'm hoping for right now. All I want is Naraku DEAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OMG, OMG OMG!!!! YOU HAFTA UPDATE SOON!!!! THE SUSPENSE IS DRIVING ME CRAZY!!!! :pulls out hair and jumps around:

Not Bad. Your attention to detail is great but your fic is all over the place making it confusing to read I just read you first tweleve chapters and I still don't know whats going there is no established plot but by now you should have least started a plot to sto story. Well I hope to see more of this fic it has great potential with your attention details and the way you write.

Totally awesome!!!!

(seriously, those are the only words I could think of to show how groovy and great your story and plot is!

cool story i really love it. hope you can update soon.

Your attention to detail, planning, excution and timing all seem to be very good. I applaude you for that. But you apparent disregard for your readers prevents me from finishing this story. I made it up to chapter 12 (almost finished it before I had to turn away). It's not the rape and violence. You handled those situations very well, very sensitivily. But it went on for TOO long. No emotional break to allow your reader(s) to recover. I feel urged to encourage you to consider the reaction of your readers as you write your story. The fact that it went on way too long ruined this for me, and I can not continue it. It has gotten too disturbing. I look forward to reading your next story.

MOre more more! wow sooo much more soon please! I love this story! Please keep me updated!