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for A Dangerous Substitute

by Rhea

person Julie
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LEMON!!! What will happen next? Will they finally get together?
Please update as soon as possible.
person RaquelGreenleaf
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, you should make the next chapter a lemon. It would be really nice to see them like that, after all they have been through. They really deserve it. After all the hard times, they deserve to have that type of 'fun'.

post again soon
person SkatCat
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome fic! I've really been enjoying the story! Will Jade be arrested for attempting to rape Kagome? I hope so! Also, I think a lemon would hit the spot! GO LEMON! ...Um yeah....*cough*... Anyway, keep up the great work! Can't wait for the next chap!


^._.^ SkatCat
person KagoKitty
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
*Goes through her own seizure*
oh...my kami...lord...help me...if i get...over this...i'm...gonna...fuckin pump...youp, up, bitch!!
lol, thanks for the shout outs, but...godS!! ...i'm dying of anxiety here!! Hurry up with the updates, please...
*sob* just don't...*small seizure*...kill her!!
ja ne, chica,
=^-.~^=
person MelMuff
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LEMON!!! YES!!! They're alone at her house and he just confessed that he loved her. It's PERFECT!!!
person Lady Set¨
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please, oh please, tell me Inu Yasha and the gang are going to help her pull out of this mess. I was really hesitant to read this story due to friends going through the same thing. But I took the leap and did it, now I'm glad I did. You are a wonderful author.

I wonder if Kag is going to tell Inu how she feels.

*scratches her head*

I hope so, if not it is still a great story and I am sure she will tell him eventually.

Lady Sethia
person Nina
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is probably one of the best fics I've ever read. I'ts such a fresh storyline. You handled Kagome's addiction with honesty and insight. I'm so impressed with your knowledge on the subject. You took a storyline that you could easily have dragged out until we all died of boredom. However, you kept your writing detailed and straight to the point with such touching emotions from all of the characters. Bravo!!!! You should be very proud of yourself.
I vote for a lemon in the next chapter. Yeah!!!!!! Don't ever stop writing.
person Lady Sethia
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Wipes furiously at the never ending tears streaming from her eyes* Omg!! What a horrible place to end the chapter! It definately keeps people coming back for more though. Another wonderful chapter, even though it is sad. You've gotta update soon. I'm a wreck here!!


Lady Sethia
person JewelM.
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is really getting good! Dont stop here(i hate cliffys)
person KagoKitty
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
breathe in...breathe out...breathe in...
'ok guys, i'm a crackhead, i've hurt you all because i like to waste my time getting wasted, i've eglected my duties so i could get an unneaded high when all our fans would rather see me screw inuyasha.'
lol...seriously!! *dum dum dum* How IS she gonna get outta this one??
*sigh* i guess i'll just leave it up to u, okay?? lol...
betta make it good, chica,
=^-.~^=