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for A Dangerous Substitute

by Rhea

person kagome1312
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i liked it good story!!!!!!!!!!
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. this is proably one of the best drug-related ficsi've ever read. thought it saddens me that Kag would have to restortto that i can understand teh pressure that led to it. i'm sorry that you, as the author, had to go through it as well. i can't imagine losing a freind at the young at of 16 to that crap. you had some great raw emotion strung about in the plot as well as some very nitty gritty realities on life. i think the way Kag's mom handeled the situation was good, and yet so cannon that it hurt. sometimes i think her mother is to understanding. great story, really great plot, wonderful capture to the characters personatilites.
person Caitriona
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was an excellent fic. You took a very serious topic and handled it rather well. Good Job.

Caitriona
person Darkunknownone
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice Story
person Manda
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting idea, having Kagome take drugs in order to deal with Inuyasha's idiocy. I hope you haven't given up on this story, it's too good to just leave in the Land of Uncompleted FanFictions!!!! ^_^ Keep up the good work!
person JewelM.
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I glad you ended with a lemon. That was perfect. Epic or Fluffy...A fluffy version would be good. You can show them in the future with little kids running around. You could also tell us what happened to Kikyo, Naraku and are Miroku and Sango going to get together? Hey what about little Shippo? You can do alot with this story. And your a great writer so I know I'm gonna love reading them!!
Keep Writing!
person LilithQueen
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good ;angsty,I'm interested to see how this turns out.Please continue.
person Lady Sethia
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful, just beautiful. I had to read your story twice. Very very good work on it. I look forward to your next piece!

Lady Sethia
person KagoKitty
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! *hands diploma* I'm so proud!! *sob* And I LOVED this story!! As for your next...either one would be fun for me!! ...I know it doesn't help you at all, but that's just the way I feel!! You decide...it'll work out best that way.
Ja ne, chica,
Until next time!!!
=^-.~^=
person JewelM.
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And tlot lot thickens! This story is getting better. By the way will there be any lemons?(Though it might be too soon to add one...) Any way your the author and your doing your job right so I have no right to tell you how to do your job.( especially since its been over a year since I updated MY stories...^_^;...)I love how fast u update! Keep it up! (for the sake of my sanity!)