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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So that's what he thinks about in that tree? Hahaha...that was great Del.I enjoyed it!
Huggles Khell
Huggles Khell
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow Del,
I do believe this is the first one of your fic's that I have read, and I really like it. I love how you go through a full range of emotions for him. And I like the way you portray Kikyou in his mind, and his resolution of her/kagome in his mind, that was totally along my wavelength of how I think of Kikyou/Kagome, and it is cool to see someone write it. Hopefully tomorrow I will be able to read some more of your work.
dragonflyelj
I do believe this is the first one of your fic's that I have read, and I really like it. I love how you go through a full range of emotions for him. And I like the way you portray Kikyou in his mind, and his resolution of her/kagome in his mind, that was totally along my wavelength of how I think of Kikyou/Kagome, and it is cool to see someone write it. Hopefully tomorrow I will be able to read some more of your work.
dragonflyelj
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good story.
You should continue it.
You should continue it.
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January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a wonderful story.
I made a very good travel to inuyasha´s mind and how it has slowly changing in the anime/manga.
Very good.
I would love to read a sequel of it...the conversation between kagome and Inuyasha.
Congratulations
Very good work
I made a very good travel to inuyasha´s mind and how it has slowly changing in the anime/manga.
Very good.
I would love to read a sequel of it...the conversation between kagome and Inuyasha.
Congratulations
Very good work
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January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That seemed very close to what Inuyasha would be thinking. I liked the end the best, when he came to the conclusion. Very good. Keep it up!
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January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww, that was all cute & junk.
Don't mind me, I'm just gonna sit here and have a moment.
Ja,
CybrEmly
Don't mind me, I'm just gonna sit here and have a moment.
Ja,
CybrEmly
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January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story, I love the Inu Yasha POV and the mentioning of the books. I don't think enough people use the fact that his mother was a princess to show that he does have some education. The listener being a firefly was also very cute and I enjoyed that aspect. The inu youkai behavior was another good addition to the story. Very well done, the epiphany at the end was very sweet. Wonderful.
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January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is so cute!!! I love it! I hope you're not going to make in only a one-shot though. Maybe a prequel? Either way, it was very good, very within character, and well written. Please continue it. =)
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January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love your story it was wonderful. it was really like in his brain saying this thoughts. i love InuYasha/Kagome stories but also i hope that happend the the Anime story line. but i can't wait to read what u write next.
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January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooooooh....so that's wut he's been thinkin all this time....good job, delly!!
I think next you should add either kagome's thoughts...or either a chapter of what plays out that next day when they talk *nudge nudge*
*giggle* See ya sumtime around!!
Ja ne, chica,
=^-.~^=
I think next you should add either kagome's thoughts...or either a chapter of what plays out that next day when they talk *nudge nudge*
*giggle* See ya sumtime around!!
Ja ne, chica,
=^-.~^=