rate_review Reviews

It started off good, but then halfway through, you stopped paying attention to your capitization and things like that. Make sure that you don't want to finish so soon that you forget the small things.

Write more... >_>

so the story starts very well... but i don't get the clue: is this a mir/san or inu/kag story? maybe you can make it clear in the second chap. honestly, i'm a mir/san fan but it could be also a "both-pairs-story", nee?
hey, i don't know if you like critic but the first chap says too much about the relationship between sango and miroku. in my opinion you should introduce them slightly. but maybe it's just me who think so.
i hope i didn't hit you directly in the face with my review.
can you make an author-note to say if you're going to update the next chap and when?

i love your story the first chap is so good. but i would be pleased to know if it is a mir/san fanfic. i hope so

how long does it take to update plz do it soon

plz finish

gaaah this is the author...i cant log into my account so it may be a bit before i add some more! I'm sooo sorry >.< but once i figure out the problem i will post imediatly!!

MaliceMizer

Quit inserting your own thoughts! It's distracting! Just tell the damn story! And get a beta reader! Your grammar, spelling, and stupid errors suck!

Meow. I like it much-much. ... Yeah. ... This is 00shizukanayami00 by the way so go read mnficnfic cuz you love me.

... Yeah. Anyway, I really liked your intro. Miroku-kun's a wee bit depressed tho'. Bet you meant to do that. Give him a snuggle for me.

Love you

sorry...um..only way i know how to check reviews...until i find out ignore me! ^-^