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for Last Chance

by EroPrincess

person Ginny
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
:::sniff::: that was an amazing fic!!! but that goddamn bastard!!! :::growls at inuyasha:::
person Liz
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! that is soooo sad.. ::tear:: it made me cry.. ::sniffle sniffle:: Thats sad.... lol that was great though!! lol GJ!! me want more though.... lol poor poor Kagome.. lol

With much love
Huggles
~Liz~
person Insane Vampiress
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are a horrible person! The story was really good and it was so sweet, but it was sort of a 'cruel and unusual punishment' ending. It was really sad...you made me cry.... Poor Kagome....
person REVIEWER #34321
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was so sad!! *wipes tears away* poor Kagome.....*huggles InuYasha and Kagome plushies*

Although it WAS sad and very dark/depressing, you totally rock!!!! GO YOU!

PS. Do you think you can add to this story? Like, InuYasha runs back to Kagome's arms? *nudges* I know it's a long shot, but I hate sad endings...they make me feel sad.....: )

Keep on Writin'
Reviewer #34321
person New Fan
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You can have a good story here. Think about, they both think that is it they had there dance and he married Kikyo and Kagome goes on with her life. But what if something came about that night. Kagome became pregnant and she keeps her child from Inuyasha. Could have a triangle relationship in which Kikyo can not have children. Something to think about or maybe you can find someone who might be interested in writing the story. I like it and which you can write more to this story.