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January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow this is a really really good story!! i can't wait to c what happens next!! update soon!!! ~*~Kagome~*~
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January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
plz plz plz plz plz dont make this into a sess/kag fic. c'mon, kag and inu are all in love and happy. if anything kagome with her new powers and inuyasha should go r anr and kill sess. e-mail me telling me what u plan to make the pairing, but if it counts for anything, i hope its kag/inu
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January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
IT WAS GOOD YES YES YES AND PUT THE CAT IN FOR SESHSY
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January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow wow wow very very good wow lol what a lemon ^_^ ch 3
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January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay another great chapter this story is very good lol i like sesshomaru causeing problems he is fun that way lol rated A++++++
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January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Constructive crititism if I may: When someone is speaking start a new line. Keeps it clean, easy to read. Detail, you nev never have too much.
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December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It would be to have instead of being just Inuyasha it would be him and Sesshoumaru. They both rut and mark her as their mate,with her consent of course.
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December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yayyyyyy i like it i like it more to come i hope update update
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December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey it's a gstorstory line and all but you need more detail. your not telling what the characters are thinking enough and not putting enough emotion in things. It sound like this story is being told by a robot or something. keep wroking on it.
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December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey thanks evryone for your reviews!!!!!!!