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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, but not good either. You need to add a little more plot and detail. Like the reason why Kagome thinks that Inuyasha's hot, and the reason why they kissed each other instead of backing away.
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FOR FUCKSAKES MAKE MORE CHAPTERS OR ELSE
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September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this so far! I hope you decide to update soon!!!!! Thx!!!
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July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PUT SOME HARD CORE YURI LEMONS IN THERE. YOU SHOULD HAVE A THING WHERE SOMEHOW KIKYO COMES IN AND IS YURI TOO, AND HAS A RELATIONSHIP WITH BOTH OF THEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay the ending part where Sango and Kagome kissed, unneeded. They just got asked out this is not time to have those two coming out of the closet make them both straight for the rest of the fic.
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December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
when are you going to update?