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for Melting ice

by Strawberries

person Rin-chan
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it was sooo long since you updated... :(
please countinue....please......!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person TAJE
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 3) Okay, so now the element of the storm has now created a problem for our beloved Rin and Sesshomaru. Kagura better prove herself to this powerful entity. Her act of concern for Rin should count as something. But I know you got other plans to get these two demons together. So I'll read on.
person TAJE
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 4) Oh! Mystery, Mystery. What is going on with Kagura? Sesshomaru puzzled. I'm enjoying this so far. Your Original Character is Cool! Uh... no pun intended. I'll read on.
person TAJE
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 1) I alway am amazed how Sesshomaru manage to loose Rin. But I think this time the God-forsaken snow storm played a big role in Rin disappearance. Not to mention Rin's way of seeing a pretty flower and to focused on picking it. Kagaura is even in a tizzy from this blasted storm I will read on.
person TAJE
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 2) Well now, I suprised Kagura's being kind to Rin. I love the way you used the entity of a Powerful elemental being. One that neither Sesshomaru nor Kagura can fight against. But I believe all will come to pass as I read on. Peace
person Rin-chan
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love your story...i'm thinking about the end,.. will Sesshoumaru save Kagura from this "storm" or something???
i'm looking forward to the next chapter :) pretty please,, countinue!!! :))))
person nutmeg
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loving it.
person Inu-midoriko
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey
i luv the story so far
pklzplzplzplzplz update soon
person neko-xan
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE REAL SOON!!!
person Teania
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey can you hurry and add another chapter? I would really like to read more of the story, its really interesting so please update soon.