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for A Change In Pace

by KILLFRENZY

person Kaye
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good, no I take that back, very good. I like, hope your life allows an update soon!
person JC
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!!!YOU HAVE TO UPDATE!!!!!!!!
person Shala
schedule October 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok I'll give you points for the mentionint of birth control, there are so many stories out there that never mention a word of it. It's good that someone thinks of it.

But you've missed one point with Inuyasha saying he would simply withdraw before ejaculation. The docter should have told him that is not a good method either, due to the fact that males actually have pre-ejacultary(or however it's spelled -_-) that contains semen, so his partner can still get pregnat eve if he withdraws.
person No One Knows
schedule October 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awesome start!
person One Star Critic
schedule October 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmm Have you ever had a pet cat? If so, then you would know that a cat does NOT wag it's tail when it's content. That is a canine (A DOG) behavior. A Cat PURRS when it's con.
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A cat swishes it's tail when it's aggitated, frustrated or angry NOT when it's happy -_-
person Kyoto
schedule October 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh it is soo good. can't wait for the update! huggs:)Kyoto please update soon!