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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The concept isn't bad, but I don't think that Inuyasha would just run away like he did. That was a little OOC for him. He would still try to fight. Also, work on the sentence structure that you use in your dialogue, and you'll be all set.
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September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey Girly,
ME LIKES IT! IT"S VERY ORIGINAL! KEEP GOING I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! ^___^
ME LIKES IT! IT"S VERY ORIGINAL! KEEP GOING I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! ^___^
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September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
what are the pairings for this story? i dont like reading any other pairing except kag/inu
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September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
me loves! can't wait for update! i think i know what happens! please update!huggs:)Kyoto