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I will say that this is a promising strart. You have good grammar. I hope the chapters are longer though. The beginning is okay but could you add more description possibly? I know most people know what the cahracters look like but it never hurts to say what Inuyasha's or shippo's or anyone's hair feels like or explain the color differently. Like calling it ebony or midnight shade. What's the setting? What does the hot springs feel like? Is there a breeze, are there trees? Visuals are a great thing.

Also I know this is an Inu/KAg fic but will Sango and miroku be showing up?

ah,you left me hanging.now i can`t wait for the next chapter,i`m all hyper up about the for the future chapters

well i can't say if it was good or bad yet, but it seems to me like a promising start.

Okay, I'm guessing that the three forms of Inuyasha is one when he's a hanyou, two he's a human, and three he's a full demon. Am I correct? Anyway, I would like to comment that cha chapters need to be a little longer in length, but other than that you're off to a good start. So, please continue and update as soon as possible. Ja ne.

ok im guessing that one of them is going to be his evil form but fo how is it for god sake keep write write i need mo plezzzzz keep going cause the title is even got me wornding so plezzz keep going