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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The second chapter was good, but the first chapter needs work. I mean seriously, why on earth would Inuyasha actually tell Shippou to get Kagome for him? Everyone knows the relationship between those two. He would have simply gotten her himself.
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am waiting for more. Please more it's very good.
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October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I WIL LOOK FORWARD TO IT!!
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October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey! That was a nice start! The chapters are too short but if it's due the writers block (I'm not a writer at all *lol* not an english writer *g*) maybe some suggestions might help? Finish this scene - pleeeease. It sounds so promising. But besides the lemon - what kind of story will you write? If it's the fullmoon night - isn't it dangerous for them? Some Youkais may show off...
And about Miroku and Sango - I would love to read about them ^^ They're such a nice - and hot - couple *g*
And about Miroku and Sango - I would love to read about them ^^ They're such a nice - and hot - couple *g*
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October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hehe me soo likes it when Inu shreds things...specially Kagome's clothes, but oopsie no claws hehe...soo love it when he gets frustrated with her bra too..great chap luved it please update soon..:-) huggles and smiles Mija
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October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OK now what was that...lol... I want more you could have finished the scene.... OH what a tease... lol... I think it is going great so far... Yes Chaps way to short... but I understand the collage thing and the writers block (bangs head on desk)... Collage however we need the damn writers block we do not...lol.. Buthoughought is waing ing good until I was abruptly cut off...lol... I want more.... GREAT JOB!!! keep going and good luck on the writers block... sighsssss.... I know it welll..... Mules
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October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm....Now that I've finally seen Inuyasha, dear Kindite, I can better understand this story! Awesome! What happens next, I wonder? You must leave some for the imagination....
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September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
If you don't write more, I wont be happy to say the least.
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September 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yay their going to have sex yay iam so happy, this just makes my frickin day. Wow, lets be more creative Cyndi....... other than that its nicely written.
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September 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!!!!!