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by KILLFRENZY

person Kaye
schedule September 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, that was funny. Kyoto was taking notes. That made me laugh. Oh was this a good chapter. I reallke tke the story, can't wait for the next update.
schedule September 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yipeeeeeee.... Lemon right off the bat..... Hey who can blame her he is just so sexy hanging from that tree... great story can't wait for more... He He.....
person stayingput29
schedule September 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HEY!!!, what was that.... was that just a tease or what.... Now we need more.... I was wondering if he starts at Kikyo's time will he remember the rest of them.... His love for Kogame... or does he and Kiyo live happily ever after.... I needs to know... And Does Sango's villiage live... Does he save all them too... Hummmm.... so many questions... Hope for new chapter soon..... Later.... Mules....
person Kyoto
schedule September 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awwww...thank you. and the story i love it!the lemon was awsome! so can't wait for the update! Huggs:)Kyoto
person Mija
schedule September 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg this chap was too funny..too bad Kikyo still got killed and thought Inuyasha had betrayed her, but at least he didnt love her this time..and the whole Kagome and Inu haveing sex right on the spot?? hehe..all I can say it the first time I saw him I thought I would love to be Kagome and jump his bones too..hehe ya im a perv and I make no apologies for it..lol..anyhow another great chap and cant wait to read more soo please update soon k?? pretty please?? ty ty ty huggs and smiles Mija..:-)
person Kyoto
schedule September 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hmmm...looks like Kyoto is getting popular here at aff. I'm so happy people are reading the stories with her. i'm glad you asked me if you could use her in this story. i hope she helps with this story. as for the story. it's really good. i hope you update real soon!Huggs:)Kyoto
person Kaye
schedule September 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I had a guess where it was heading the second you wrote, "That was when he woke up. Kagome is a month early, and I’m in heat now, great, I won’t be able to resist her." This is great, since Kikyo never loved him will she have to come back? I don't really like that thought. I think this story is great, if not very funny, I'm weird don't ask or take offence if you didn't mean it to be funny. It rocks, can't wait for you to update!
person Mija
schedule September 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooh this is good..I soo cant wait for the next chap..but by changing the future at the point when he met Kikyo doesnt it mean he will not ever get to meet Kaogme??? sigh Imust know soo please please update K? ty ty ty huggs Mija..:-)