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for A Fresh Start

by KILLFRENZY

person Godess of Hell
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I love your story so far. This is going to be short since I don't have an answer to your other questions but I don't think Inu should have the restrainig spell. Since Kagome is a hanyou/youkai now too just have her knock him out. That's just my opinion though. Please keep updating so quickly. Ja!
person stayingput29
schedule October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey now no picking on Hojo... I like Hojo inocent and pure so sweet and cute... Yeah I like Hojo... lol... and now for the good stuff... HOT DAMN!!!! wish I had a man that could go and go and go and go.... Yipeee!!! Now wouldn't that be a good life.... Good Chap can't wait for more.... Mules
person Kaye
schedule September 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Here's a website that has summaries of the anime up. It goes up to number 132 I think. http://www.inuyashaworld.com/epsummary.cfm Sounds great so far. As for the Kikyo pairing, does she even have to come back? Welp can't wait for the next chapter, keep it up!
person Kaye
schedule September 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hojo is the denses idiot in the whole world! SHe's probably right, even if her and INuyasha had sex right in front of him he'd still think that he had a shot! Greaapteapter! Can't wait to run into everyone, that'll be some fun! Update whenever!
person Kaye
schedule September 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can give you the name of the friends and that's it: Eri, Yuka and Ayumi. That's it. I'm sorry. Can't wait for you to update, whenevr that is.
person Kaye
schedule September 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So now they go to school. I'm wondering if Sango, Sesshy and Miroku willin sin school? Or are the still in the past? Hehe, I love this story!
person Kyoto
schedule September 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ok i so love this story. this story is aw. ca. can't wait to see what happens at school!hehe! kyoto and the thong was priceless!huggyotoyoto
person Miroku2
schedule September 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Dear Author,
This lemon fic is one spicy enchilata!!!!!! I mean, first, there was angst and sadness. Then there was the incident with Kikyou (probably the best non-lemon part in the whole fic). Then there was just plain mind-blowing hardcore sex!! Oh yes, keep up the good work!

Your Persistent Reader,
Miroku2

P.S. In the next chapter, have Sesshoumaru come into the picture, and of course, lots and lots of mind-blowing sex!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Kyoto
schedule September 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hahahahahahaha! i love the joke Kyoto playe on Kagome and Inuyasha! great Lemons! keep up the good work!Hugg:)Kyoto
person Kaye
schedule September 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DId Kagome change before? I'm just wondering because Inuyasha seemed in shock that she changed, well maybe not shock, pleased would be more like it. Kyoto makes her grand apperance. Hehe, that is great. It is totally awesome. I really like this story, hmm their both in heat. Wait I'm confused, didInuyasha know who she was? I thought he had his memory? Or was that only his memory of Ka? DI? DId getting pinned to the tree have soemthing to do with his sudden loss of memory? Really good! Can't wait for the update!