After the Jewel Disappears

Ok there are a few things I would like to clarify. First i know Sesshoumaru is Out of Character there is a reason for this. I can't tell you but you will find out in other chapters. Second I haven't plotted this one out it was just a spur of the moment kind of story, after I get a few chapters in I will go back through and Edit them. And lastly I understand that the Character's kind of pop out and drown out the story that is something I am going to be fixing while editting which I will be doing now. I hope to have the revised chapters up next week. Thank you FourShotChild for the constructive criticsm. I really do appreciate it. I will try to get editted chapters up before halloween but I am not sure how many I can get the way I see it in a week. Until next time!