Divine Fallacy

               
Author's Note:

   Hey again, I know doing this probably irritates people, sorry. I just havent got alot of reponses from chapter 3 and I'm unsure if I screwed up. I editted chapter two to fit, just one little phrase though where he runs into Kikyo. I just had trouble with things when I was writting it, like, you know when you're going with the flow and ideas popping and then all of a sudden your screen fries and you have to continue on this mignature screen, very distracting lemme tell ya. I'm sorry if chapter three disapointed you all. I'll go over it again and see if I can edit it to flow more properly. As for chapter 4, I don't know, I have a general Idea of what I want to do but I'm not sure If I should go on. Another Fic idea popped into my head and I was just wondering if you guys would be mad If I temporarely put this fic on hiatus for a while and got on with the other one. Just asking opinions.

As for the people that did review Chapter 3 and liked it, Arigatou. :3 (Thank You)

Miakachan: Dante's Divine Comedy? Nope, never heard of it. The title for this fic came to me while I was looking through the dictionary for some reason, actually I don't think I had a reason to look through it, maybe I was bored. Anyway, I fell on Fallacy, and the meaning was: 1 A mistaken belief, esp. based on unsound argument. 2 Faulty reasoning; misleading or unsound argument.
And since Divine can also mean Beautiful, when putting 2 and 2 together, the title basically means Beatiful Misunderstood Aentsents. Muahahahahah

Platinum-IceFire: Haha your onto me! But not quite to make her pass out so he could kidnap her. :P It expl it it in chapter 4.

Spud: Yea I did laugh, it reminded me of something that happened to me when I was a kid. I think I was like.. 7? Anyway, me and my friend (a neighbor) were hanging out playing something stupid like making sand castles or something and we saw a squirrel, we immediately wanted to feed it so she ran inside to get peanuts and we fed it. So from then on, it kept coming back and we kept feeding it, I think we called it Skippy.. I don't remember. Anyhow, one day when it came, we had no more peanuts, so we decided to give it an almond instead, upon giving it to "it", the squirrel sniffed it and litterally like threw it to the ground, we were like what the hell?! So we gave it another one, and it did the same thing, this time it was making weird noises like some kind of hissing and decided to bolt down the tree and and it litterally chased my friend, I am so not kidding, it chased her and still made that funny noise, I just stood there stupified and when she got relatively far enough, it turned around and decided to come charge at me. I didn't move really I was too confused and I watched it come closer and closer... then wham! It ran into my legs and through them, climbed up a tree again and jolted away. We were like WHAT THE FUCK!?!?!?!?!!1!2##@$%
And from that day on, we never saw skippy again. :(

Ceaseless Cloudy Days: Oi..losing interest by chapter 2? Oh no.. :( Atleast Chapter three got a good response, Thank you. :3


Anyhow, sorry for this if I irritated people :( I'm just confused if I should continue or move on with something else. Comments? Questions? Suggestions? Ideas? Anything, feel free to e-mail me. :3 yokai_neko@hotmail.com


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