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Payback, Teasing, and Saying Sorry
Ok part there here we go.
Before we start I thought I’d explain a little about what’s going on since I’m breezing through this. There is a difference between being a uke and submitting, I’m explaining it here but if you want to figure it out on your own or if you’re worried about a little spoilage then skip the next two paragraphs. You won’t miss anything it will all in the story as well. What follows is just the more condensed version.
A uke is just a demon who is naturally subservient (I would use submissive but that might be confusing) to a dominant male or female (yes there are seme females). He or she is still has the same rights and privileges in the pack but would normally never be expected to be any kind of leader. It may not be clear but again I’ve made Ginta a uke and Hakkaku a seme (thought not mated). They work, interact, and treat each other as equals, but if they were to ‘play’ it would be pretty obvious who would ended up on top sooner or later. A seme has a more assertive personality but at its core, just wants to protect its mate.
Submitting, or breaking, is different. The breakee would be docile; pretty much pet-like (read The Choices We Make) and would be almost slavish to the breaker. This is what Kouga feels needs to be done to Inuyasha. He’ll allow Inuyasha to live his own life after it’s done because after he’s broken he’ll never have the will to challenge the wolf-prince.
Kouga is really using Inuyasha’s naiveté and personal ‘demons’ against him and its working.
****8
After the encounter at the hot springs, the humans of Inuyasha’s group noticed a change in the hanyou’s attitude. Though he tried to remain aloft and serious all the time; he couldn’t help but laugh at the crazy antics his new brothers kept getting into.
Ginta and Hakkaku kept running up to give him a quick sniff and a lick, then backing off before Inuyasha could get his hands on them. They continuously invited him to wrestle or spar despite the fact that he could easily knock them senseless.
It felt like a weight from Inuyasha’s heart had been lifted for the first time in a very long time.
The first day after Kagome’s return was quite entertaining. The miko’s senses led them to a human village of all places. Upon arriving an old man rushed out to meet them and all but begged them to take his shard of the Shikon no Tama.
Apparently the old geezer had found the shard while working in a field and when he realized what it was, rushed to the center of the village and proclaimed himself headmaster. He then demanded that the people build him a much larger house and that all the young women shall now bed with him. His wife, a large, overbearing beast of a woman, changed his mind it seems by repeatedly beating him with a broom handle.
So the group stayed the night in the village and set out again the next morning. The next day, however, was very different. The group came upon what Kagome called ‘the mother-load’. Ten jewel shards in a single location.
It was like battling Naraku again. The jewels had been taken by some kind of plant demon; which kept them deep under the ground making them nearly impossible to get to. Every time one of the group tried to get close, a vine or root would shoot from the group at blinding speed. Only Inuyasha’s and Kouga’s speed prevented their companions from being skewered. Not without consequences though.
By the time the demon had finally been brought down Inuyasha could barely stand. His clothing was drenched in his own blood; originating from a fist-sized hole in his belly and numerous other wounds. Sango offered the use of Kirara to carry him back to the relative safety of the forest but Kouga insisted on doing it himself.
As usual, Inuyasha complained about being fussed over the whole time.
“Will you leave me alone!?” He shouted as Kagome fixed the last bandage around his leg. “These wounds are nothing; I’ll be fine in a couple of days.”
“You won’t be ‘fine’ if you keep moving around!” The frustrated girl responded. “You nearly died today and you need to rest! Honestly, you get this way every time; pushing everyone away like it’s a sign of weakness. I wish…hey! Where are you going?”
The Inu had and grabbed his newly cleaned hitoe and began limping away. “Just back off, I want to be alone.”
Kagome stood to go after him but Kouga stopped her. “I’ll go.”
“Really? Are you sure?” She asked giving the wolf a suspicious look. “Please don’t fight; he really does need to rest.”
“Don’t worry, Kagome. I have no intention of fighting; I just think it’s time he yelled at someone else.” Taking a moment to wave off Ginta and Hakkaku; the wolf-prince followed the hanyou’s scent deeper into the woods. He took a slow pace wanting the mutt to get as far from the others as possible.
When he finally did catch up, Kouga saw that Inuyasha had managed to dress himself and was now trying to lower himself to the ground without causing anymore pain. The wolf came up behind him and gently propped the hanyou up against a tree.
The Inu showed his appreciation in the usual way. “Your hearing damaged, Fleabag?” He said in an angry voice. “I said that I wanted to be left alone!”
“I know what you wanted but I think I know what you need, Pup.” Responded the ookami as he took a seat next to the hanyou.
“Keh! Says you! And what did I say about you callin’ me names?”
Kouga scooted a little closer to the hanyou. “Come on, Inuyasha. It’s not like I’m calling you something bad. You call me ‘fleabag’ and ‘scrawny’ all the time. Tell you what; I’ll only call you ‘pup’ when we’re alone.”
When Inuyasha didn’t respond, the alpha-wolf considered it a small success and let silence fill the air before continuing.
“I know why you push people away when you get hurt. I figured out your secret.”
He winced as he tried to turn his body to face Kouga. “I don’t know what you’re talking about; I ain’t got a secr-.”
Kouga leaned close and whispered; “You secretly want someone to take care of you.”
If the hanyou was ever to overreact to something, it was now. He rose to his knees shouting. “That’s a lie! I can do fine on my own. I don’t need anybody!” The weakened Inu even tried to take a swing at Kouga; which the wolf caught with ease.
Kouga pulled the Inu to him even as the hanyou struggled to overcome his own broken body. “I’m not saying your weak, Pup. Letting others take care of you isn’t a weakness; especially for you. The life you’ve had, I can almost see the need in your eyes. You were always so lonely; wanting to be accepted by someone, anyone, and never getting it. It’s no surprise that there’s a part of you that wishes for someone to hold you, promise that everything would be ok and make you feel safe.”
The hanyou gave him a meek ‘shut up’ but ceased trying to pull away.
“It scares you; makes you afraid that you’re becoming weak and can be terrifying for a half-breed. And that’s why you push people away, isn’t it?” Inuyasha didn’t respond but he let his head rest on Kouga’s shoulder. “Don’t worry, I’ll never tell. And when you come to the north, you’ll see what you’ve been missing. But you must never push your pack away, if you won’t let your friends be there for you, they won’t expect you to be there for them.”
Carefully, the ookami released his hold on Inuyasha. “Thanks wolf, but I’m still not ready to go back and face the others…I need to think.”
Kouga gave the pup his trademarked grin “Let’s rest here tonight and we can go back in the morning.”
The hanyou didn’t argue about the ‘we’ business. He settled down and closed his eyes but opened them again when he felt Kouga untying his clothes. “What are you doing?”
“You’re going to get tangled with these things tied so tightly; one good turn and you’ll start bleeding again.” Kouga was dancing on the inside; Inuyasha made no attempt at stopping him. The wolf loosened the hitoe and pulled it open; exposing the hanyou’s bandaged chest. He then undid the obi and pulled Inuyasha’s hakama away from his waist; the wolf took a quick peek at the hanyou’s limp member then placed the loosened material back down. “There, now you’ll be more comfortable.”
The Inu almost immediately feel asleep; he wouldn’t be fully healed by morning but proper rest would do wonders for him. Kouga was about to reach over and reposition the hanyou in same submissive position he had placed Inuyasha in during the new moon. But he stopped when the pup did it himself.
Kouga watched as the sleeping Inuyasha snuggled up against his leg and tenderly grasped his inner thigh. The wolf was delighted and he guided the hand a little high; this time coming to rest completely on his cock.
The alpha-wolf couldn’t resist stroking the hanyou’s thick locks. *Just a few more steps and you’ll have given yourself to me completely, my little uke. And you’ll never try to leave; your own fear won’t let you.*
The wolf went to sleep content that night.
*****8
Inuyasha woke the next morning feeling tremendously better; both physically, now that he had time to heal, and emotionally after his little chat with Kouga.
His mirth came to an abrupt end when the last of the sleep left his mind and he found himself curled up against the wolf’s thigh. Worse yet, his right hand had somehow ended up holding the ookami’s cock.
Humiliated, the Inu carefully inched away from Kouga and then quickly stood up, intended to get back to camp as fast as possible. With any luck Kouga would never find out about this.
Unfortunately, he forgot about the ookami loosening his clothes last night and as soon as he straightened, his hakama ended up pooled around his ankles; causing him to trip. Falling forward, he made a last ditch effort to prevent himself from plowing face first into the ground. Pitching back he over-corrected and landed right in Kouga’s lap.
“UFF! What the…?” The wolf was so suddenly pulled from a sound sleep that he instinctively wrapped his powerful arms around his would-be attacker. It was only when he realized that he was holding a half-naked Inuyasha that he relaxed. Well, this is one helluva way to be woken-up. Morning Inuyasha!”
“Morning to you too, wolf.” Came a sarcastic reply as the Inu wiggled in Kouga’s arms. “Will you let go of me?”
“Let me check your wounds first; sit still.” The ookami’s hands floated over the hanyou’s ribs and stomach; giving them a good squeeze and he watched as Inuyasha tensed and inhaled sharply. “Still not healed, thought so.”
He traveled downward to the mutt’s injured thigh, finding it just as tender as the other wounds. Then Kouga found something else. “Hey, what do we have here?” He said encircling his hand around the Inu’s morning wood. “If you wanted to play, pup, all you had to do was say so.”
“But I did-*GASP*!” Inuyasha lost the ability to form words the moment Kouga began simultaneously jerking his cock and sucking his neck. *Damn, why do I have so sensitive right there?* He wondered.
The prince sucked on the pale flesh in his mouth with all his strength while at the same time enjoying the sensation of Inuyasha’s warm pre-cum as it coated his hand. He wanted to leave another mark on his little hanyou’s neck; knowing that Ginta and Hakkaku would get a real kick out it when they saw it.
Sooner than either of them expected, Inuyasha’s body spasmed and the Inu emptied himself into Kouga’s waiting hand. “Wow, pup, take a look at this.” The wolf said holding up his cum-covered arm. “You must have been pretty pent up; I can see that we’re going to have to play more often.” And much to the embarrassed half-breeds surprise, Kouga began to lick himself clean.
“Mmmmm, Ginta was right about you, pup. You taste delicious.” Kouga said as he lapped the cooling seed from his skin while the wide-eyed hanyou watched.
Once he had finished his meal, the wolf replaced his arms around Inuyasha’s arms and chest. “Now that I’ve helped you with your ‘problem’, are you going to help me with mine?” Kouga pressed his erection against the Inu’s bare bottom.
“Well…I mean…that is…” Inuyasha stuttered. He couldn’t think straight. For some reason, he really wanted to put his hands back under Kouga’s pelt; maybe even more than his just hands. Maybe it was due to the close bond he now shared with the wolf; whatever it was, Inuyasha really wanted to please him. He turned and looked into the ookami’s eyes and for the first time noticed just how handsome he was. Inuyasha could almost…
Then suddenly a far off voice destroyed the moment.
“Inuyasha! Kouga!” Kagome yelled at the top of her voice.
Inuyasha scrambled to get out of the wolf’s hold but Kouga tightened his grip. “Let go, they’ll be here any minute!”
“Not until you promise to pay me back later.” Kouga couldn’t help it. He was having a lot of fun, teasing the hanyou. “Come on, you know you want to.”
“Fine, I’ll pay you back!” The exasperated Inuyasha answered; he really didn’t want the others to see him like this. “Now LET GO!” Inuyasha summoned what strength he had recovered; preparing to break the ookami’s hold (and an arm or two if necessary), but before he could do anything, Kouga released him and helped him stand up.
Kouga knelt behind the pup and helped pull up his hakama but not before taking a good long stare at the firm ass he had so recently fondled at the hot springs. It took all his willpower not to give the twin mounds a squeeze as he stood up.
Inuyasha had just barely managed to finish dressing when Miroku and Sango broke through the foliage.
“There you two are. We were getting worried.” The demon slayer said.
“Kagome has started preparing the morning meal; are you going to join us?” Added the monk.
“You go on, Inuyasha. I’m going to scout ahead and see what’s further down the road we’re traveling.” Kouga gave Inuyasha a quick smile. “Besides, I’ve already eaten.”
“You have?” Questioned Sango. “What did you eat?”
“Oh just something that feel into my lap.” And giving mortified hanyou’s bottom a quick pat, sped away.
*****8
The group rested for awhile longer before setting out again. And Inuyasha was forced to endure the winks and little teases by Ginta and Hakkaku when the pair noticed the hickey on his neck.
Normally Inuyasha would have pounded them for making fun of him but to his own surprise, he actually found it kind of nice. Like it was ok because they were brothers now and the two wolves probably wore a mark like this many times. The hanyou’s biggest problem came from Kouga. The wolf kept giving him hungry looks; as if he were continuously reminding the Inu about his promise to ‘pay him back’.
Inuyasha knew that he should but the whole thought of willingly pleasuring another guy still made his heart hammer in his chest. In the end he decided tell the wolf that he just couldn’t do it and if worse came to worse, he’d just spend the night avoiding Kouga until the ookami gave up.
A few hours later, night came and the group of demons and humans set up camp. Meals were made and conservations were had; eventually everyone drifted off to sleep…everyone but two that it.
When they were sure that everyone else was slumbering, Kouga and Inuyasha rose and faced each other. Inuyasha was the first to speak.
“Look wo-Kouga. I can’t do it. I’m just not ready…to do that for you. I’m sorry; maybe another time.” He whispered; hoping to convince the ookami to let him off the hook.
Kouga had been prepared for this and he probably should have accepted the hanyou’s excuse. Problem was, he was enjoying teasing the pup way too much. Which is probably why he couldn’t let it go.
“Oh that’s real convenient.” He whispered back in an accusatory voice. “It’s ok for me to do it or for Ginta and Hakkaku to spend themselves pleasuring you. But when you’re called on to return the favor, suddenly it’s not right. I thought you were an honorable man.”
The remark was like a slap in the face for Inuyasha. The one thing he always had was his word, but he couldn’t shake the feeling that this wasn’t right. He needed time. “Okay, I’ll do it.” He said figuring that he could just spend the night playing ‘cat and mouse’ with the wolf and then swear to fulfill his debt later; when he was ready.
“Well? Aren’t you going into the woods?” The Inu asked when Kouga didn’t move. “I’ll follow in a moment.”
“Nope.” The wolf said with a serious tone. “I want you to do it here.”
“What!?” Inuyasha replied almost too loudly. “We can’t! Someone will see us!”
The ookami-prince marched right up to the hanyou before responding. “It’s the only way I know you’ll do it. You already tried backing out. How do I know that you won’t try spending the entire night avoiding me?”
Inuyasha cursed inwardly. Kouga had guessed his plan. “We can’t do it here. If Kagome or the other humans see me they’ll…” He couldn’t even finish the sentence. What would the others think of him if they saw him pleasuring the wolf?
“Well, I gotta have assurances that you won’t run off.” He thought for a moment, and then grinned when an idea popped into his head. “I know; your clothes, give them to me.”
“Are you crazy!?” Whispered the hanyou. “Why?”
“So I know you’ll follow me; if you don’t then you’ll have to explain to everyone how you ended up naked. Come on, not like you have anything to hide from me.”
Inuyasha scowled at the remark. He couldn’t believe he was doing any of this, but he shed his hitoe and undershirt and tossed it to the ookami. Kouga caught the material but held his hand out expectantly.
“Bottoms too.” He said.
The hanyou went wide-eyed. The wolf actually expected him to strip completely in front of everyone?! “Come on, you gotta leave me with something.”
“Sure, pup, you can keep your sword. Better hurry up and decide.” The teasing Kouga said. “I think Shippou’s about to wake up and you know he’ll ask questions.”
Swallowing the hanyou quickly removed his hakama and gave it to Kouga; then waited.
The alpha-wolf stared at Inuyasha as the pup held the Tessaiga in front of him in an unsuccessful attempt to cover himself. He let the hanyou squirm for a full minute before taking off at a full sprint; wishing that he could run backwards so he could see the clothes-less Inu scramble to keep up with him.
When he finally came to a stop, Kouga had just enough time to hide Inuyasha’s clothing under a nearby bush before the hanyou arrived.
“Where’s my stuff?” The panting Inu asked.
“Don’t worry about them. Here, help me get out of my armor.” Answered the ookami.
Inuyasha looked like he wanted to deck the wolf but instead he assisted the wolf undress. And by assist, it meant that Kouga stood there while Inuyasha removed his furs and armor. When he tried to pull off the kilt, it refused to budge and Kouga pressed his body against Inuyasha’s.
“There’s a tie in the back. Just under my tail.” He said.
Being so near the ookami, Inuyasha was forced to reach around and fumble with the knot while the wolf looked into his eyes. Finally the cloth gave way and Inuyasha felt Kouga’s cock resting against his own. The hanyou glanced down, taking his first good look at the wolf’s member.
They were relatively the same size, though Kouga’s looked a thicker. And his balls looked swollen and full.
“I’ve been waiting for this all day.” Kouga said, drawing the Inu’s attention back to his face. “I know you’re nervous, just do as I say and I promise you’ll enjoy it too. Now take it in your hand.”
The hanyou complied, wrapping the familiar feeling organ in his hand; it almost immediately began to enlarge.
“Good, now lightly squeeze and stroke it.” Kouga continued never breaking eye contact with his puppy.
Inuyasha’s hands glided over the hot skin; realizing that this was his doing. He was exciting the wolf; he was making the wolf desire him. The Inu couldn’t explain it but that thought aroused him.
“Now place your thumb at the tip and rub it.” Kouga commanded.
As soon as the half-youkai did this, he felt a stream of pre-cum leak onto his palm.
“Now spread the liquid all over my length. Oh that feels so good, Inuyasha.” Kouga began to thrust his hips a little as more pre-cum ejected from his dick. “Please, pup, suck on my chest like Ginta and Hakkaku did to you.”
Breaking their stare, the Inu looked at one of Kouga’s nipples. It was hard and standing straight out; bending down Inuyasha parted his lips and took the nub between his teeth.
“Ah! Not so hard, just suck and wash your tongue over it.” The wolf was now pushing his member in and out of the Inu’s hand. He was perfectly willing to continue until he came, then he felt Inuyasha’s hard cock on his leg. And he wondered, could he take this just a little bit further?
Easing the hanyou off his nipple and stepping back he looked at the future uke. He made his gamble. “I want your mouth on me.”
For a moment Inuyasha looked confused, but understanding dawned on his face and for a moment he looked nervous. Then he took a deep breath and nodded. He watched as Kouga walked over to a nearby tree and sat down against it. Spreading his leg invitingly and using a hand to wag his ridged cock in the hanyou’s direction, he waited for Inuyasha to come to him.
The white-haired Inu knelt between his legs and pressed the leaking cock between his lips. And slowly took it into his mouth. It was barely half way in when he started to gag.
Kouga stroked his fuzzy ears as he spoke. “Just hold it there for a bit. Allow your throat to relax before you take the rest.”
It took several minutes but eventually Inuyasha took the thick rod down his throat. He tried to pull back but Kouga stopped him.
“Let it stay there until you are used to breathing around it. That way, you’ll get used to it and you won’t gag when you start sucking.” The wolf held Inuyasha against his crotch for a time, enjoying the feeling of the pup’s chin resting on his balls. Then finally he allowed the hanyou to orally pleasure him.
Inuyasha sucked as best he could, remembering how Ginta had done it to him. He bobbed his head up and down and found that Kouga was right; his throat didn’t close up at all, making it easier. Then the wolf made a final request.
“Jerk yourself, pup. I know you’re aroused.” His voice thick with lust. “But watch your rhythm; I want us to release together.”
It didn’t take long; they were both more than ready. Grabbing the hanyou’s head, Kouga forced his cock all the way in and, not giving Inuyasha a choice, shot his seed directly into his stomach. The wolf came so hard that his body arched off the ground and he was only barely aware of Inuyasha’s seed spraying the ground beneath them. With his last ounce of strength, he pulled back and released the last of his ample load into the Inu’s mouth.
Resting against the smooth bark of the tree, the prince gave a little shutter when his now limp cock fell from Inuyasha’s mouth. “That was great, Puppy. You should-.” The rest of Kouga’s banter died on his lips when he saw the hanyou’s face.
Inuyasha was red and he refused to meet the ookami’s gaze. Clearly he was upset and Kouga now realized that he had gone too far. The hanyou had said that he wasn’t ready and yet Kouga still manipulated him into doing it. Worse, he had forced Inuyasha to strip in the middle of camp and then chase him naked through the forest. Then Kouga topped it all off by having him take his dick into his mouth…And now the wolf was about to start teasing him again.
“Just give me my clothes back, Fleabag. I kept my word and paid you back.” The Inu-hanyou said coldly.
Kouga reached under the nearby shrub and pulled the red kimono out. And when the Inu reached for it, the wolf pulled him into a tight hug and in his most sincere voice…
“I’m sorry, Inuyasha. You said that you didn’t want to and I ignored you. Then I teased you just to get you riled up. I shouldn’t have done those things.
The hanyou pulled away from him. “Yeah, fine.”
“No, I’m serious. Look, you’re part of my tribe now and when you said ‘no’ I should have backed off. And I swear the next time I will listen…If there will be a next time.”
Inuyasha looked directly at him and it was then Kouga noticed a bit of his cum resting in the corner of the hanyou’s mouth. “You got a little of my...er…” And taking his thumb, wiped the substance away; only to be surprised when Inuyasha grabbed his hand and licked the clawed digit.
“You taste pretty good too, ya scrawny-wolf.” Inuyasha said with a grin.
Kouga laughed, knowing that he had been forgiven. Seizing the pup’s hitoe, he spread it over Inuyasha’s back, making a makeshift blanket. “Let’s sleep here.”
“Here?” Responded Inuyasha. He was, after all, lying between Kouga’s legs with his pert little bottom peaking of his robes and their cocks were squashed together. “Wha…What about the others?”
“By the time they find us tomorrow morning, we’ll be awake. Besides, you should get used to sleeping with others. During the winters, it’s the only way to stay warm at night.”
“Bet you all don’t sleep naked…do you?”
The ookami grinned and gave the hanyou’s nose an affectionate lick. “Best way to share heat is to not have any barriers between you and the body you’re sharing a bed with.” Wrapping one arm across Inuyasha’s back, Kouga persuaded the mutt to rest his head on his chest. And with the other, he placed his hand on the crack of the hanyou’s butt; becoming delighted when Inuyasha didn’t protest. It wasn’t long before he felt shallow breathes blow over his skin; the Inu slept.
*****8
Though appearing otherwise, sleep didn’t come easy to the wolf-prince. He kept thinking about the promise he had made about backing off whenever Inuyasha said to. It didn’t escape him that this might interfere with his plans to dominate the Inu.
When the final breaking takes place, what if Inuyasha asks him to stop? Would he? Or would he disregard his own word?
Kouga mentally shook away these worries. They didn’t matter. The pup was almost past the point of being able to reject him now. No, Inuyasha would come to live in the ookami’s tribe. He would join hunting parties and defend the den from outside threats. He would love and be loved by all; Inuyasha would never leave. But before any of that could happen, the Inu would first willingly offer his submission to his recognized alpha. And Kouga would accept it and reduce the half-breed to his right place as a uke. After that...the wolf couldn’t say.
Inuyasha maybe a hanyou but he was powerful; he should breed, or rather be bred. Perhaps one of the other semes would…Again Kouga mentally shook his thoughts. A part of him hated what he was doing. Using Inuyasha’s ignorance about being a demon, preying on his fears to strengthen the bonding they now shared. It was dishonorable but it had to be done. The mutt had become too powerful, too much of a danger; he had to be broken.
What came after, Kouga would leave to fate. At least this way Inuyasha would still be one of the pack and might even have a shot at happiness.
******8
Okay another update. I’m going crazy over the reviews you guys are sending in. Thanks for the support.
Reviews:
Zak- yeah I’m still trying to throw some humor into it despite the depressing nature of the fic. And you know that I had to have G and H in there. Next to Kagome (yep I like girls too) and Kouga, I’d love share a bed with those two on a cold winter’s night. Oh and Miroku can come too.
Sexy Sesshy- Sesshomaru will make an appearance but he’ll really be in character. As I’m sure you’ve figured. Part of Kouga is torn about this; all I can say is keep reading and reviewing.
Light-in-the-dark2606- Thanks I’m trying to keep them in character. I probably wouldn’t be writing all these dom/sub stories if it wasn’t one of the only few ways I see any of these characters being together. I suppose a big story about them being thrown together trying to survive would work too, but I’ll leave that to another writer. YOU HEAR THAT, OTHER WRITERS?!
A random…- I hope you’re still intrigued.
Kurgari- I can’t tell you the number of times I’ve had to stop just so I can try to remember what I wanted to type. I start writing one part and some excellent sentence for another part pops in my head and I write down fast but by the time I get back to typing, I’ve lost rhythm.
Vyperbites- Trust me, I know what you mean. I was having a much easier time when I was writing about Kouga being a uke. Inuyasha’s life kind of reflects a bit of my own so breaking him kind of breaks a piece of me. But take heart, the ending hasn’t been written yet.
Dino1- You’re right. If they knew what now, Kouga would lose the very things he’s trying to keep a hold of; their loyalty, respect and love. That is why Kouga’s being so cautious. If they don’t figure it out before Inuyasha submits then they probably never will.
K, that’s all for now. If you reviewed on y-gallery or FF, I’ll respond to you through their respective messaging services.
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Before we start I thought I’d explain a little about what’s going on since I’m breezing through this. There is a difference between being a uke and submitting, I’m explaining it here but if you want to figure it out on your own or if you’re worried about a little spoilage then skip the next two paragraphs. You won’t miss anything it will all in the story as well. What follows is just the more condensed version.
A uke is just a demon who is naturally subservient (I would use submissive but that might be confusing) to a dominant male or female (yes there are seme females). He or she is still has the same rights and privileges in the pack but would normally never be expected to be any kind of leader. It may not be clear but again I’ve made Ginta a uke and Hakkaku a seme (thought not mated). They work, interact, and treat each other as equals, but if they were to ‘play’ it would be pretty obvious who would ended up on top sooner or later. A seme has a more assertive personality but at its core, just wants to protect its mate.
Submitting, or breaking, is different. The breakee would be docile; pretty much pet-like (read The Choices We Make) and would be almost slavish to the breaker. This is what Kouga feels needs to be done to Inuyasha. He’ll allow Inuyasha to live his own life after it’s done because after he’s broken he’ll never have the will to challenge the wolf-prince.
Kouga is really using Inuyasha’s naiveté and personal ‘demons’ against him and its working.
****8
After the encounter at the hot springs, the humans of Inuyasha’s group noticed a change in the hanyou’s attitude. Though he tried to remain aloft and serious all the time; he couldn’t help but laugh at the crazy antics his new brothers kept getting into.
Ginta and Hakkaku kept running up to give him a quick sniff and a lick, then backing off before Inuyasha could get his hands on them. They continuously invited him to wrestle or spar despite the fact that he could easily knock them senseless.
It felt like a weight from Inuyasha’s heart had been lifted for the first time in a very long time.
The first day after Kagome’s return was quite entertaining. The miko’s senses led them to a human village of all places. Upon arriving an old man rushed out to meet them and all but begged them to take his shard of the Shikon no Tama.
Apparently the old geezer had found the shard while working in a field and when he realized what it was, rushed to the center of the village and proclaimed himself headmaster. He then demanded that the people build him a much larger house and that all the young women shall now bed with him. His wife, a large, overbearing beast of a woman, changed his mind it seems by repeatedly beating him with a broom handle.
So the group stayed the night in the village and set out again the next morning. The next day, however, was very different. The group came upon what Kagome called ‘the mother-load’. Ten jewel shards in a single location.
It was like battling Naraku again. The jewels had been taken by some kind of plant demon; which kept them deep under the ground making them nearly impossible to get to. Every time one of the group tried to get close, a vine or root would shoot from the group at blinding speed. Only Inuyasha’s and Kouga’s speed prevented their companions from being skewered. Not without consequences though.
By the time the demon had finally been brought down Inuyasha could barely stand. His clothing was drenched in his own blood; originating from a fist-sized hole in his belly and numerous other wounds. Sango offered the use of Kirara to carry him back to the relative safety of the forest but Kouga insisted on doing it himself.
As usual, Inuyasha complained about being fussed over the whole time.
“Will you leave me alone!?” He shouted as Kagome fixed the last bandage around his leg. “These wounds are nothing; I’ll be fine in a couple of days.”
“You won’t be ‘fine’ if you keep moving around!” The frustrated girl responded. “You nearly died today and you need to rest! Honestly, you get this way every time; pushing everyone away like it’s a sign of weakness. I wish…hey! Where are you going?”
The Inu had and grabbed his newly cleaned hitoe and began limping away. “Just back off, I want to be alone.”
Kagome stood to go after him but Kouga stopped her. “I’ll go.”
“Really? Are you sure?” She asked giving the wolf a suspicious look. “Please don’t fight; he really does need to rest.”
“Don’t worry, Kagome. I have no intention of fighting; I just think it’s time he yelled at someone else.” Taking a moment to wave off Ginta and Hakkaku; the wolf-prince followed the hanyou’s scent deeper into the woods. He took a slow pace wanting the mutt to get as far from the others as possible.
When he finally did catch up, Kouga saw that Inuyasha had managed to dress himself and was now trying to lower himself to the ground without causing anymore pain. The wolf came up behind him and gently propped the hanyou up against a tree.
The Inu showed his appreciation in the usual way. “Your hearing damaged, Fleabag?” He said in an angry voice. “I said that I wanted to be left alone!”
“I know what you wanted but I think I know what you need, Pup.” Responded the ookami as he took a seat next to the hanyou.
“Keh! Says you! And what did I say about you callin’ me names?”
Kouga scooted a little closer to the hanyou. “Come on, Inuyasha. It’s not like I’m calling you something bad. You call me ‘fleabag’ and ‘scrawny’ all the time. Tell you what; I’ll only call you ‘pup’ when we’re alone.”
When Inuyasha didn’t respond, the alpha-wolf considered it a small success and let silence fill the air before continuing.
“I know why you push people away when you get hurt. I figured out your secret.”
He winced as he tried to turn his body to face Kouga. “I don’t know what you’re talking about; I ain’t got a secr-.”
Kouga leaned close and whispered; “You secretly want someone to take care of you.”
If the hanyou was ever to overreact to something, it was now. He rose to his knees shouting. “That’s a lie! I can do fine on my own. I don’t need anybody!” The weakened Inu even tried to take a swing at Kouga; which the wolf caught with ease.
Kouga pulled the Inu to him even as the hanyou struggled to overcome his own broken body. “I’m not saying your weak, Pup. Letting others take care of you isn’t a weakness; especially for you. The life you’ve had, I can almost see the need in your eyes. You were always so lonely; wanting to be accepted by someone, anyone, and never getting it. It’s no surprise that there’s a part of you that wishes for someone to hold you, promise that everything would be ok and make you feel safe.”
The hanyou gave him a meek ‘shut up’ but ceased trying to pull away.
“It scares you; makes you afraid that you’re becoming weak and can be terrifying for a half-breed. And that’s why you push people away, isn’t it?” Inuyasha didn’t respond but he let his head rest on Kouga’s shoulder. “Don’t worry, I’ll never tell. And when you come to the north, you’ll see what you’ve been missing. But you must never push your pack away, if you won’t let your friends be there for you, they won’t expect you to be there for them.”
Carefully, the ookami released his hold on Inuyasha. “Thanks wolf, but I’m still not ready to go back and face the others…I need to think.”
Kouga gave the pup his trademarked grin “Let’s rest here tonight and we can go back in the morning.”
The hanyou didn’t argue about the ‘we’ business. He settled down and closed his eyes but opened them again when he felt Kouga untying his clothes. “What are you doing?”
“You’re going to get tangled with these things tied so tightly; one good turn and you’ll start bleeding again.” Kouga was dancing on the inside; Inuyasha made no attempt at stopping him. The wolf loosened the hitoe and pulled it open; exposing the hanyou’s bandaged chest. He then undid the obi and pulled Inuyasha’s hakama away from his waist; the wolf took a quick peek at the hanyou’s limp member then placed the loosened material back down. “There, now you’ll be more comfortable.”
The Inu almost immediately feel asleep; he wouldn’t be fully healed by morning but proper rest would do wonders for him. Kouga was about to reach over and reposition the hanyou in same submissive position he had placed Inuyasha in during the new moon. But he stopped when the pup did it himself.
Kouga watched as the sleeping Inuyasha snuggled up against his leg and tenderly grasped his inner thigh. The wolf was delighted and he guided the hand a little high; this time coming to rest completely on his cock.
The alpha-wolf couldn’t resist stroking the hanyou’s thick locks. *Just a few more steps and you’ll have given yourself to me completely, my little uke. And you’ll never try to leave; your own fear won’t let you.*
The wolf went to sleep content that night.
*****8
Inuyasha woke the next morning feeling tremendously better; both physically, now that he had time to heal, and emotionally after his little chat with Kouga.
His mirth came to an abrupt end when the last of the sleep left his mind and he found himself curled up against the wolf’s thigh. Worse yet, his right hand had somehow ended up holding the ookami’s cock.
Humiliated, the Inu carefully inched away from Kouga and then quickly stood up, intended to get back to camp as fast as possible. With any luck Kouga would never find out about this.
Unfortunately, he forgot about the ookami loosening his clothes last night and as soon as he straightened, his hakama ended up pooled around his ankles; causing him to trip. Falling forward, he made a last ditch effort to prevent himself from plowing face first into the ground. Pitching back he over-corrected and landed right in Kouga’s lap.
“UFF! What the…?” The wolf was so suddenly pulled from a sound sleep that he instinctively wrapped his powerful arms around his would-be attacker. It was only when he realized that he was holding a half-naked Inuyasha that he relaxed. Well, this is one helluva way to be woken-up. Morning Inuyasha!”
“Morning to you too, wolf.” Came a sarcastic reply as the Inu wiggled in Kouga’s arms. “Will you let go of me?”
“Let me check your wounds first; sit still.” The ookami’s hands floated over the hanyou’s ribs and stomach; giving them a good squeeze and he watched as Inuyasha tensed and inhaled sharply. “Still not healed, thought so.”
He traveled downward to the mutt’s injured thigh, finding it just as tender as the other wounds. Then Kouga found something else. “Hey, what do we have here?” He said encircling his hand around the Inu’s morning wood. “If you wanted to play, pup, all you had to do was say so.”
“But I did-*GASP*!” Inuyasha lost the ability to form words the moment Kouga began simultaneously jerking his cock and sucking his neck. *Damn, why do I have so sensitive right there?* He wondered.
The prince sucked on the pale flesh in his mouth with all his strength while at the same time enjoying the sensation of Inuyasha’s warm pre-cum as it coated his hand. He wanted to leave another mark on his little hanyou’s neck; knowing that Ginta and Hakkaku would get a real kick out it when they saw it.
Sooner than either of them expected, Inuyasha’s body spasmed and the Inu emptied himself into Kouga’s waiting hand. “Wow, pup, take a look at this.” The wolf said holding up his cum-covered arm. “You must have been pretty pent up; I can see that we’re going to have to play more often.” And much to the embarrassed half-breeds surprise, Kouga began to lick himself clean.
“Mmmmm, Ginta was right about you, pup. You taste delicious.” Kouga said as he lapped the cooling seed from his skin while the wide-eyed hanyou watched.
Once he had finished his meal, the wolf replaced his arms around Inuyasha’s arms and chest. “Now that I’ve helped you with your ‘problem’, are you going to help me with mine?” Kouga pressed his erection against the Inu’s bare bottom.
“Well…I mean…that is…” Inuyasha stuttered. He couldn’t think straight. For some reason, he really wanted to put his hands back under Kouga’s pelt; maybe even more than his just hands. Maybe it was due to the close bond he now shared with the wolf; whatever it was, Inuyasha really wanted to please him. He turned and looked into the ookami’s eyes and for the first time noticed just how handsome he was. Inuyasha could almost…
Then suddenly a far off voice destroyed the moment.
“Inuyasha! Kouga!” Kagome yelled at the top of her voice.
Inuyasha scrambled to get out of the wolf’s hold but Kouga tightened his grip. “Let go, they’ll be here any minute!”
“Not until you promise to pay me back later.” Kouga couldn’t help it. He was having a lot of fun, teasing the hanyou. “Come on, you know you want to.”
“Fine, I’ll pay you back!” The exasperated Inuyasha answered; he really didn’t want the others to see him like this. “Now LET GO!” Inuyasha summoned what strength he had recovered; preparing to break the ookami’s hold (and an arm or two if necessary), but before he could do anything, Kouga released him and helped him stand up.
Kouga knelt behind the pup and helped pull up his hakama but not before taking a good long stare at the firm ass he had so recently fondled at the hot springs. It took all his willpower not to give the twin mounds a squeeze as he stood up.
Inuyasha had just barely managed to finish dressing when Miroku and Sango broke through the foliage.
“There you two are. We were getting worried.” The demon slayer said.
“Kagome has started preparing the morning meal; are you going to join us?” Added the monk.
“You go on, Inuyasha. I’m going to scout ahead and see what’s further down the road we’re traveling.” Kouga gave Inuyasha a quick smile. “Besides, I’ve already eaten.”
“You have?” Questioned Sango. “What did you eat?”
“Oh just something that feel into my lap.” And giving mortified hanyou’s bottom a quick pat, sped away.
*****8
The group rested for awhile longer before setting out again. And Inuyasha was forced to endure the winks and little teases by Ginta and Hakkaku when the pair noticed the hickey on his neck.
Normally Inuyasha would have pounded them for making fun of him but to his own surprise, he actually found it kind of nice. Like it was ok because they were brothers now and the two wolves probably wore a mark like this many times. The hanyou’s biggest problem came from Kouga. The wolf kept giving him hungry looks; as if he were continuously reminding the Inu about his promise to ‘pay him back’.
Inuyasha knew that he should but the whole thought of willingly pleasuring another guy still made his heart hammer in his chest. In the end he decided tell the wolf that he just couldn’t do it and if worse came to worse, he’d just spend the night avoiding Kouga until the ookami gave up.
A few hours later, night came and the group of demons and humans set up camp. Meals were made and conservations were had; eventually everyone drifted off to sleep…everyone but two that it.
When they were sure that everyone else was slumbering, Kouga and Inuyasha rose and faced each other. Inuyasha was the first to speak.
“Look wo-Kouga. I can’t do it. I’m just not ready…to do that for you. I’m sorry; maybe another time.” He whispered; hoping to convince the ookami to let him off the hook.
Kouga had been prepared for this and he probably should have accepted the hanyou’s excuse. Problem was, he was enjoying teasing the pup way too much. Which is probably why he couldn’t let it go.
“Oh that’s real convenient.” He whispered back in an accusatory voice. “It’s ok for me to do it or for Ginta and Hakkaku to spend themselves pleasuring you. But when you’re called on to return the favor, suddenly it’s not right. I thought you were an honorable man.”
The remark was like a slap in the face for Inuyasha. The one thing he always had was his word, but he couldn’t shake the feeling that this wasn’t right. He needed time. “Okay, I’ll do it.” He said figuring that he could just spend the night playing ‘cat and mouse’ with the wolf and then swear to fulfill his debt later; when he was ready.
“Well? Aren’t you going into the woods?” The Inu asked when Kouga didn’t move. “I’ll follow in a moment.”
“Nope.” The wolf said with a serious tone. “I want you to do it here.”
“What!?” Inuyasha replied almost too loudly. “We can’t! Someone will see us!”
The ookami-prince marched right up to the hanyou before responding. “It’s the only way I know you’ll do it. You already tried backing out. How do I know that you won’t try spending the entire night avoiding me?”
Inuyasha cursed inwardly. Kouga had guessed his plan. “We can’t do it here. If Kagome or the other humans see me they’ll…” He couldn’t even finish the sentence. What would the others think of him if they saw him pleasuring the wolf?
“Well, I gotta have assurances that you won’t run off.” He thought for a moment, and then grinned when an idea popped into his head. “I know; your clothes, give them to me.”
“Are you crazy!?” Whispered the hanyou. “Why?”
“So I know you’ll follow me; if you don’t then you’ll have to explain to everyone how you ended up naked. Come on, not like you have anything to hide from me.”
Inuyasha scowled at the remark. He couldn’t believe he was doing any of this, but he shed his hitoe and undershirt and tossed it to the ookami. Kouga caught the material but held his hand out expectantly.
“Bottoms too.” He said.
The hanyou went wide-eyed. The wolf actually expected him to strip completely in front of everyone?! “Come on, you gotta leave me with something.”
“Sure, pup, you can keep your sword. Better hurry up and decide.” The teasing Kouga said. “I think Shippou’s about to wake up and you know he’ll ask questions.”
Swallowing the hanyou quickly removed his hakama and gave it to Kouga; then waited.
The alpha-wolf stared at Inuyasha as the pup held the Tessaiga in front of him in an unsuccessful attempt to cover himself. He let the hanyou squirm for a full minute before taking off at a full sprint; wishing that he could run backwards so he could see the clothes-less Inu scramble to keep up with him.
When he finally came to a stop, Kouga had just enough time to hide Inuyasha’s clothing under a nearby bush before the hanyou arrived.
“Where’s my stuff?” The panting Inu asked.
“Don’t worry about them. Here, help me get out of my armor.” Answered the ookami.
Inuyasha looked like he wanted to deck the wolf but instead he assisted the wolf undress. And by assist, it meant that Kouga stood there while Inuyasha removed his furs and armor. When he tried to pull off the kilt, it refused to budge and Kouga pressed his body against Inuyasha’s.
“There’s a tie in the back. Just under my tail.” He said.
Being so near the ookami, Inuyasha was forced to reach around and fumble with the knot while the wolf looked into his eyes. Finally the cloth gave way and Inuyasha felt Kouga’s cock resting against his own. The hanyou glanced down, taking his first good look at the wolf’s member.
They were relatively the same size, though Kouga’s looked a thicker. And his balls looked swollen and full.
“I’ve been waiting for this all day.” Kouga said, drawing the Inu’s attention back to his face. “I know you’re nervous, just do as I say and I promise you’ll enjoy it too. Now take it in your hand.”
The hanyou complied, wrapping the familiar feeling organ in his hand; it almost immediately began to enlarge.
“Good, now lightly squeeze and stroke it.” Kouga continued never breaking eye contact with his puppy.
Inuyasha’s hands glided over the hot skin; realizing that this was his doing. He was exciting the wolf; he was making the wolf desire him. The Inu couldn’t explain it but that thought aroused him.
“Now place your thumb at the tip and rub it.” Kouga commanded.
As soon as the half-youkai did this, he felt a stream of pre-cum leak onto his palm.
“Now spread the liquid all over my length. Oh that feels so good, Inuyasha.” Kouga began to thrust his hips a little as more pre-cum ejected from his dick. “Please, pup, suck on my chest like Ginta and Hakkaku did to you.”
Breaking their stare, the Inu looked at one of Kouga’s nipples. It was hard and standing straight out; bending down Inuyasha parted his lips and took the nub between his teeth.
“Ah! Not so hard, just suck and wash your tongue over it.” The wolf was now pushing his member in and out of the Inu’s hand. He was perfectly willing to continue until he came, then he felt Inuyasha’s hard cock on his leg. And he wondered, could he take this just a little bit further?
Easing the hanyou off his nipple and stepping back he looked at the future uke. He made his gamble. “I want your mouth on me.”
For a moment Inuyasha looked confused, but understanding dawned on his face and for a moment he looked nervous. Then he took a deep breath and nodded. He watched as Kouga walked over to a nearby tree and sat down against it. Spreading his leg invitingly and using a hand to wag his ridged cock in the hanyou’s direction, he waited for Inuyasha to come to him.
The white-haired Inu knelt between his legs and pressed the leaking cock between his lips. And slowly took it into his mouth. It was barely half way in when he started to gag.
Kouga stroked his fuzzy ears as he spoke. “Just hold it there for a bit. Allow your throat to relax before you take the rest.”
It took several minutes but eventually Inuyasha took the thick rod down his throat. He tried to pull back but Kouga stopped him.
“Let it stay there until you are used to breathing around it. That way, you’ll get used to it and you won’t gag when you start sucking.” The wolf held Inuyasha against his crotch for a time, enjoying the feeling of the pup’s chin resting on his balls. Then finally he allowed the hanyou to orally pleasure him.
Inuyasha sucked as best he could, remembering how Ginta had done it to him. He bobbed his head up and down and found that Kouga was right; his throat didn’t close up at all, making it easier. Then the wolf made a final request.
“Jerk yourself, pup. I know you’re aroused.” His voice thick with lust. “But watch your rhythm; I want us to release together.”
It didn’t take long; they were both more than ready. Grabbing the hanyou’s head, Kouga forced his cock all the way in and, not giving Inuyasha a choice, shot his seed directly into his stomach. The wolf came so hard that his body arched off the ground and he was only barely aware of Inuyasha’s seed spraying the ground beneath them. With his last ounce of strength, he pulled back and released the last of his ample load into the Inu’s mouth.
Resting against the smooth bark of the tree, the prince gave a little shutter when his now limp cock fell from Inuyasha’s mouth. “That was great, Puppy. You should-.” The rest of Kouga’s banter died on his lips when he saw the hanyou’s face.
Inuyasha was red and he refused to meet the ookami’s gaze. Clearly he was upset and Kouga now realized that he had gone too far. The hanyou had said that he wasn’t ready and yet Kouga still manipulated him into doing it. Worse, he had forced Inuyasha to strip in the middle of camp and then chase him naked through the forest. Then Kouga topped it all off by having him take his dick into his mouth…And now the wolf was about to start teasing him again.
“Just give me my clothes back, Fleabag. I kept my word and paid you back.” The Inu-hanyou said coldly.
Kouga reached under the nearby shrub and pulled the red kimono out. And when the Inu reached for it, the wolf pulled him into a tight hug and in his most sincere voice…
“I’m sorry, Inuyasha. You said that you didn’t want to and I ignored you. Then I teased you just to get you riled up. I shouldn’t have done those things.
The hanyou pulled away from him. “Yeah, fine.”
“No, I’m serious. Look, you’re part of my tribe now and when you said ‘no’ I should have backed off. And I swear the next time I will listen…If there will be a next time.”
Inuyasha looked directly at him and it was then Kouga noticed a bit of his cum resting in the corner of the hanyou’s mouth. “You got a little of my...er…” And taking his thumb, wiped the substance away; only to be surprised when Inuyasha grabbed his hand and licked the clawed digit.
“You taste pretty good too, ya scrawny-wolf.” Inuyasha said with a grin.
Kouga laughed, knowing that he had been forgiven. Seizing the pup’s hitoe, he spread it over Inuyasha’s back, making a makeshift blanket. “Let’s sleep here.”
“Here?” Responded Inuyasha. He was, after all, lying between Kouga’s legs with his pert little bottom peaking of his robes and their cocks were squashed together. “Wha…What about the others?”
“By the time they find us tomorrow morning, we’ll be awake. Besides, you should get used to sleeping with others. During the winters, it’s the only way to stay warm at night.”
“Bet you all don’t sleep naked…do you?”
The ookami grinned and gave the hanyou’s nose an affectionate lick. “Best way to share heat is to not have any barriers between you and the body you’re sharing a bed with.” Wrapping one arm across Inuyasha’s back, Kouga persuaded the mutt to rest his head on his chest. And with the other, he placed his hand on the crack of the hanyou’s butt; becoming delighted when Inuyasha didn’t protest. It wasn’t long before he felt shallow breathes blow over his skin; the Inu slept.
*****8
Though appearing otherwise, sleep didn’t come easy to the wolf-prince. He kept thinking about the promise he had made about backing off whenever Inuyasha said to. It didn’t escape him that this might interfere with his plans to dominate the Inu.
When the final breaking takes place, what if Inuyasha asks him to stop? Would he? Or would he disregard his own word?
Kouga mentally shook away these worries. They didn’t matter. The pup was almost past the point of being able to reject him now. No, Inuyasha would come to live in the ookami’s tribe. He would join hunting parties and defend the den from outside threats. He would love and be loved by all; Inuyasha would never leave. But before any of that could happen, the Inu would first willingly offer his submission to his recognized alpha. And Kouga would accept it and reduce the half-breed to his right place as a uke. After that...the wolf couldn’t say.
Inuyasha maybe a hanyou but he was powerful; he should breed, or rather be bred. Perhaps one of the other semes would…Again Kouga mentally shook his thoughts. A part of him hated what he was doing. Using Inuyasha’s ignorance about being a demon, preying on his fears to strengthen the bonding they now shared. It was dishonorable but it had to be done. The mutt had become too powerful, too much of a danger; he had to be broken.
What came after, Kouga would leave to fate. At least this way Inuyasha would still be one of the pack and might even have a shot at happiness.
******8
Okay another update. I’m going crazy over the reviews you guys are sending in. Thanks for the support.
Reviews:
Zak- yeah I’m still trying to throw some humor into it despite the depressing nature of the fic. And you know that I had to have G and H in there. Next to Kagome (yep I like girls too) and Kouga, I’d love share a bed with those two on a cold winter’s night. Oh and Miroku can come too.
Sexy Sesshy- Sesshomaru will make an appearance but he’ll really be in character. As I’m sure you’ve figured. Part of Kouga is torn about this; all I can say is keep reading and reviewing.
Light-in-the-dark2606- Thanks I’m trying to keep them in character. I probably wouldn’t be writing all these dom/sub stories if it wasn’t one of the only few ways I see any of these characters being together. I suppose a big story about them being thrown together trying to survive would work too, but I’ll leave that to another writer. YOU HEAR THAT, OTHER WRITERS?!
A random…- I hope you’re still intrigued.
Kurgari- I can’t tell you the number of times I’ve had to stop just so I can try to remember what I wanted to type. I start writing one part and some excellent sentence for another part pops in my head and I write down fast but by the time I get back to typing, I’ve lost rhythm.
Vyperbites- Trust me, I know what you mean. I was having a much easier time when I was writing about Kouga being a uke. Inuyasha’s life kind of reflects a bit of my own so breaking him kind of breaks a piece of me. But take heart, the ending hasn’t been written yet.
Dino1- You’re right. If they knew what now, Kouga would lose the very things he’s trying to keep a hold of; their loyalty, respect and love. That is why Kouga’s being so cautious. If they don’t figure it out before Inuyasha submits then they probably never will.
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