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InuYasha › General
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
4
Views:
6,831
Reviews:
38
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
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Chapter 2 : Plans and Plan A
Disclaimer: I don't own Inuyasha
A/N: First of all, thanks to all of my reviewers! I especially appreciated the concrit...
I have to admit I am well aware of the awkward sentence structure and was kinda hoping you guys wouldn't notice. heheh, my bad for underestimating my obviously brilliant readers. Anyhow, the problem lies with my brain and the fact that I post just as soon as I'm done a chapter...
So: I AM LOOKING FOR A BETA READER! If you are interested, please leave your name (or nickname, whatever) and your email address in a 'review', and maybe a sample of your writing/comprehension? (You don't have to say anything about the story, and the sample isn't really important either). I'd much appreciate it (the other readers probably would too.)
I apologise for taking so long, as well as for the first part of this chapter, which just really really irks me. It was what took me so long, and after a while I figured it would be better to have crap that explains stuff than to just forget about it. Any suggestions are welcome, particularly on the first part, though of course on the other parts as well. Expect a rewrite of this chapter soon, and chapter 3 should come out much sooner, since it doesn't suck. And will be much easier to write.
Chapter 2 : Plans and Plan A
Steam curled from the hot baths as Kagome and Sango sank gratefully into them.
“Aaah” groaned Kagome, pleased at the feeling of relief coming from her aching feet. After some time of contented silence, Sango turned to Kagome.
“So, he dragged you to see the sunrise? In a beautiful meadow, filled with adorable forest creatures? A meadow surrounded by resplendent trees in all their green glory? By a cliff overlooking much of the country, which looked utterly beautiful in the morning light? And you’re COMPLAINING?”
Kagome scrunched up her nose.
“Not as such,” she said “But that was it. We went to see the sunrise. He brushed my hand with his. He turned bright red then demanded we come back…
It was romantic. He does a lot of romantic things for a rude, caustic jerk, but none of them are what I need. I’m twenty-three! I HAVE NEEDS. Even the ‘virgins-for-life’ otaku* are getting more than me! I can’t TAKE it anymore.”
Sango blinked.
“Well, I was aware that you two hadn’t been progressing at a very quick rate… but, Kagome, how far HAVE you gone.”
Kagome looked up miserably and then avoided Sango’s eyes.
“Kissing” she grunted at last.
Sango’s eyes widened.
“Tell me it was with tongue at least!”
At Kagome’s embarrassed headshake to the negative, Sango’s expression turned… odd. It was a combination of disgust and pity and intrigue and seemed to say ‘why the hell didn’t you make a move earlier?!’ At last, inspiration seemed to hit her. Snapping her fingers, Sango’s lips widened in a pleased grin.
“Well, if he won’t make a move, you’ll just have to! I have just the plan! Anyways, you just have to make sure he gets you ‘accidentally’ pregnant** so that he has to succumb to your will ever after. It did wonders for my relationship with Miroku.”
There was a rustling in the bushes as Miroku’s head popped out, his face plastered in a pleased grin.
“Yes,” He interjected, “And I’ve never been happier! My dearest Sango-chan always knows what is best!”
Kagome fingered the strap of her bathing suit while looking at Miroku uneasily.
“Yeah, but I don’t think I’m comfortable with the idea of him being forced to stay with me because I tricked him. I just want to get some from the guy I love, y’know? That isn’t too much to ask, is it?”
Sango and Miroku shared a conspiratorial glance before turning to Kagome.
“No, it isn’t too much to ask Kagome. In fact, it is your right! You have a RIGHT to all the pleasure you want and need!” Said Miroku, before he leaned closer and whispered in her ear “And I wouldn’t mind helping you with that ---“
He was cut off as Sango smacked him into the water.
“What my darling husband is trying to say is that we would be happy in helping you in this quest. In fact… I have just the plan. Jealousy.
After all, remember what happened that time your Jii-chan wanted to send you to a matchmaker. This time, you will just have to capitalize on his jealousy…”
Kagome leaned in to hear more…
Plan A: Operation Jealousy
Inuyasha waltzed into the hut to find Kagome looking like a vision in a white, gauzy low cut dress. She was standing in front of the mirror, carefully applying lip paint to her perfectly formed lips. A small whine nearly escaped his throat as she smacked them together in a very suggestive manner.
“Uhhh… Sango said you wanted to see me?” He questioned.
She smiled and turned.
“Yes, I was just wondering, because Sango and I couldn’t decide, do you think this bra will be good?” She had (In what the readers may regard as terrible acting skills) yanked down the front of her garment to reveal a white lacy bra with just a hint of nipple.
He visibly gulped. When he finally found his voice, he replied.
“Uh… Uh… For what?”
She turned in (mock) surprise.
“Sango didn’t tell you? For my DATE of course.”
His expression darkened. A lot. We're talking thunderstorm clouds setting up house on his face here. He opened his mouth to yell. Kagome stepped forward and placed her palm over it.
“You can’t expect me to wait forever do you?” She said at last.
He licked her palm, and as she hastily pulled it away with a grossed out expression, he did yell.
“I SHOULD DAMN WELL BE ABLE TO! I GIVE AND GIVE AND I GIVE SOME MORE! A HUT AND FOOD AND STUFF! AND I PROTECT YOU BECAUSE YOU KNOW I… uh… really, really like you AND YOU SAID YOU really, really liked me TOO! FUCKING HELL IF YOU WANT TO LEAVE AND BE SOME ADULATED WHORE mmmphmphmmm”
Inuyasha had been cut off by Kagome’s tongue entering his mouth and her lips firmly sealing around his to cut out further sound. And to his credit, he did seem to enjoy it, and he did seem to catch on that this had been some womanly manipulation to make him jealous and frankly he was just glad that it did not in fact mean that she was leaving him for some other man. His arms pulled her in a little tighter, and very very tentatively, he reached out his tongue to tap hers. She moaned lightly at that, and he decided he enjoyed that a lot too.
Kagome smirked to herself. She had reached with both arms around her neck, and slowly she drew one arm down his back, using her nails to scratch it lightly. Then she cupped his bum and SQUEEZED and as she felt that hunk of rock hard ass she finally understood what Miroku had seen in the action all these years. And it was worth it, because even as Inuyasha drew back with fish eyes and all but vanished out the door, she had seen the one thing she had hoped she would. The tent in his pants had been very gratifying (okay, feeling the ass was too).
A/N:
* - 'Otaku' - while in many parts of North America this is considered to be a good thing, and indeed many people who consider themselves otaku are very nice and possibly sexually active people. However, it is mostly a term adopted by the otaku themselves.
In Japan however, 'otaku' means dangerously/creepily obsessed. And while this does often refer to people in love with anime, it also refers to a number of other passtimes, and I can't imagine it ever really being thought of in good terms. They are equivalent to the people who don't just dabble in something like Dungeons and Dragons (and might be considered nerdish, but it doesn't really diminish their possible sexual conquests), they are like the people who live and eat and breath DnD, whose pale, translucent skin has almost never seen the light of day, whose life decisions are based on many weird dice. It is not that ALL of them will never get laid, it is just that the percentage of 35 year old virgins rises drastically in that kind of population (like 95 % to 0.0001% in the 'normal' population).
** - Sango's comments here are meant almost jokingly, since she is aware of Miroku being in the bushes near her. I know this wasn't communicated very effectively... Anyways, this is kind of an old married couple joke. Maybe Sango did um... use her feminine wiles in such a way, but that seems drastically out of character to me. This is a part that is meant to be achingly funny, but it was really hard writing it in such a way. Expect a rewrite.
To anyone concerned with the quality of Plan A - it is just a very basic cliched plan. The great, incredibly weird ones, the ones I am really looking forward to writing can only come out after I've at least made a few half-hearted attempts at normalcy.
Thanks very much to -
Alice M., Nick F. (Oh, there will be hell to pay. Very hot payment indeed ;)), mayhem (thanks), Asharra (thanks), Gyousei (thanks), Anvil (lol, okay, no pitiage), inugirl (thanks), Ka-chan23 (thanks ALOT!), fallenangel7583 (Okay, the hut building was a convenience thing that Kagome misinterpreted - he wants her with him, and its not like he sleeps there when she isn't there. It's so she has somewhere to stay while she's in the feudal era. Thanks), Jebus (Thanks for the concrit and review. But... I'm confused?), snowfall (Again, thanks for the concrit, I really do appreciate it, along with the review.), GV (um... Update ahoy!), turtlerad (more is here), Alvida (Sometimes smart people have dumb hopes. We can only assume that Kagome just thought the very very best of Inuyasha, and that his sexdrive would somehow overcome... everything. Anyhow, this is really exaggerated for the humor, because I don't think that even THEY could manage eight years sex free. Six at most. I hope. I hope alot. Thanks)
A/N: First of all, thanks to all of my reviewers! I especially appreciated the concrit...
I have to admit I am well aware of the awkward sentence structure and was kinda hoping you guys wouldn't notice. heheh, my bad for underestimating my obviously brilliant readers. Anyhow, the problem lies with my brain and the fact that I post just as soon as I'm done a chapter...
So: I AM LOOKING FOR A BETA READER! If you are interested, please leave your name (or nickname, whatever) and your email address in a 'review', and maybe a sample of your writing/comprehension? (You don't have to say anything about the story, and the sample isn't really important either). I'd much appreciate it (the other readers probably would too.)
I apologise for taking so long, as well as for the first part of this chapter, which just really really irks me. It was what took me so long, and after a while I figured it would be better to have crap that explains stuff than to just forget about it. Any suggestions are welcome, particularly on the first part, though of course on the other parts as well. Expect a rewrite of this chapter soon, and chapter 3 should come out much sooner, since it doesn't suck. And will be much easier to write.
Chapter 2 : Plans and Plan A
Steam curled from the hot baths as Kagome and Sango sank gratefully into them.
“Aaah” groaned Kagome, pleased at the feeling of relief coming from her aching feet. After some time of contented silence, Sango turned to Kagome.
“So, he dragged you to see the sunrise? In a beautiful meadow, filled with adorable forest creatures? A meadow surrounded by resplendent trees in all their green glory? By a cliff overlooking much of the country, which looked utterly beautiful in the morning light? And you’re COMPLAINING?”
Kagome scrunched up her nose.
“Not as such,” she said “But that was it. We went to see the sunrise. He brushed my hand with his. He turned bright red then demanded we come back…
It was romantic. He does a lot of romantic things for a rude, caustic jerk, but none of them are what I need. I’m twenty-three! I HAVE NEEDS. Even the ‘virgins-for-life’ otaku* are getting more than me! I can’t TAKE it anymore.”
Sango blinked.
“Well, I was aware that you two hadn’t been progressing at a very quick rate… but, Kagome, how far HAVE you gone.”
Kagome looked up miserably and then avoided Sango’s eyes.
“Kissing” she grunted at last.
Sango’s eyes widened.
“Tell me it was with tongue at least!”
At Kagome’s embarrassed headshake to the negative, Sango’s expression turned… odd. It was a combination of disgust and pity and intrigue and seemed to say ‘why the hell didn’t you make a move earlier?!’ At last, inspiration seemed to hit her. Snapping her fingers, Sango’s lips widened in a pleased grin.
“Well, if he won’t make a move, you’ll just have to! I have just the plan! Anyways, you just have to make sure he gets you ‘accidentally’ pregnant** so that he has to succumb to your will ever after. It did wonders for my relationship with Miroku.”
There was a rustling in the bushes as Miroku’s head popped out, his face plastered in a pleased grin.
“Yes,” He interjected, “And I’ve never been happier! My dearest Sango-chan always knows what is best!”
Kagome fingered the strap of her bathing suit while looking at Miroku uneasily.
“Yeah, but I don’t think I’m comfortable with the idea of him being forced to stay with me because I tricked him. I just want to get some from the guy I love, y’know? That isn’t too much to ask, is it?”
Sango and Miroku shared a conspiratorial glance before turning to Kagome.
“No, it isn’t too much to ask Kagome. In fact, it is your right! You have a RIGHT to all the pleasure you want and need!” Said Miroku, before he leaned closer and whispered in her ear “And I wouldn’t mind helping you with that ---“
He was cut off as Sango smacked him into the water.
“What my darling husband is trying to say is that we would be happy in helping you in this quest. In fact… I have just the plan. Jealousy.
After all, remember what happened that time your Jii-chan wanted to send you to a matchmaker. This time, you will just have to capitalize on his jealousy…”
Kagome leaned in to hear more…
Plan A: Operation Jealousy
Inuyasha waltzed into the hut to find Kagome looking like a vision in a white, gauzy low cut dress. She was standing in front of the mirror, carefully applying lip paint to her perfectly formed lips. A small whine nearly escaped his throat as she smacked them together in a very suggestive manner.
“Uhhh… Sango said you wanted to see me?” He questioned.
She smiled and turned.
“Yes, I was just wondering, because Sango and I couldn’t decide, do you think this bra will be good?” She had (In what the readers may regard as terrible acting skills) yanked down the front of her garment to reveal a white lacy bra with just a hint of nipple.
He visibly gulped. When he finally found his voice, he replied.
“Uh… Uh… For what?”
She turned in (mock) surprise.
“Sango didn’t tell you? For my DATE of course.”
His expression darkened. A lot. We're talking thunderstorm clouds setting up house on his face here. He opened his mouth to yell. Kagome stepped forward and placed her palm over it.
“You can’t expect me to wait forever do you?” She said at last.
He licked her palm, and as she hastily pulled it away with a grossed out expression, he did yell.
“I SHOULD DAMN WELL BE ABLE TO! I GIVE AND GIVE AND I GIVE SOME MORE! A HUT AND FOOD AND STUFF! AND I PROTECT YOU BECAUSE YOU KNOW I… uh… really, really like you AND YOU SAID YOU really, really liked me TOO! FUCKING HELL IF YOU WANT TO LEAVE AND BE SOME ADULATED WHORE mmmphmphmmm”
Inuyasha had been cut off by Kagome’s tongue entering his mouth and her lips firmly sealing around his to cut out further sound. And to his credit, he did seem to enjoy it, and he did seem to catch on that this had been some womanly manipulation to make him jealous and frankly he was just glad that it did not in fact mean that she was leaving him for some other man. His arms pulled her in a little tighter, and very very tentatively, he reached out his tongue to tap hers. She moaned lightly at that, and he decided he enjoyed that a lot too.
Kagome smirked to herself. She had reached with both arms around her neck, and slowly she drew one arm down his back, using her nails to scratch it lightly. Then she cupped his bum and SQUEEZED and as she felt that hunk of rock hard ass she finally understood what Miroku had seen in the action all these years. And it was worth it, because even as Inuyasha drew back with fish eyes and all but vanished out the door, she had seen the one thing she had hoped she would. The tent in his pants had been very gratifying (okay, feeling the ass was too).
A/N:
* - 'Otaku' - while in many parts of North America this is considered to be a good thing, and indeed many people who consider themselves otaku are very nice and possibly sexually active people. However, it is mostly a term adopted by the otaku themselves.
In Japan however, 'otaku' means dangerously/creepily obsessed. And while this does often refer to people in love with anime, it also refers to a number of other passtimes, and I can't imagine it ever really being thought of in good terms. They are equivalent to the people who don't just dabble in something like Dungeons and Dragons (and might be considered nerdish, but it doesn't really diminish their possible sexual conquests), they are like the people who live and eat and breath DnD, whose pale, translucent skin has almost never seen the light of day, whose life decisions are based on many weird dice. It is not that ALL of them will never get laid, it is just that the percentage of 35 year old virgins rises drastically in that kind of population (like 95 % to 0.0001% in the 'normal' population).
** - Sango's comments here are meant almost jokingly, since she is aware of Miroku being in the bushes near her. I know this wasn't communicated very effectively... Anyways, this is kind of an old married couple joke. Maybe Sango did um... use her feminine wiles in such a way, but that seems drastically out of character to me. This is a part that is meant to be achingly funny, but it was really hard writing it in such a way. Expect a rewrite.
To anyone concerned with the quality of Plan A - it is just a very basic cliched plan. The great, incredibly weird ones, the ones I am really looking forward to writing can only come out after I've at least made a few half-hearted attempts at normalcy.
Thanks very much to -
Alice M., Nick F. (Oh, there will be hell to pay. Very hot payment indeed ;)), mayhem (thanks), Asharra (thanks), Gyousei (thanks), Anvil (lol, okay, no pitiage), inugirl (thanks), Ka-chan23 (thanks ALOT!), fallenangel7583 (Okay, the hut building was a convenience thing that Kagome misinterpreted - he wants her with him, and its not like he sleeps there when she isn't there. It's so she has somewhere to stay while she's in the feudal era. Thanks), Jebus (Thanks for the concrit and review. But... I'm confused?), snowfall (Again, thanks for the concrit, I really do appreciate it, along with the review.), GV (um... Update ahoy!), turtlerad (more is here), Alvida (Sometimes smart people have dumb hopes. We can only assume that Kagome just thought the very very best of Inuyasha, and that his sexdrive would somehow overcome... everything. Anyhow, this is really exaggerated for the humor, because I don't think that even THEY could manage eight years sex free. Six at most. I hope. I hope alot. Thanks)