The Crow *Status Update* 1st part of Epilogue Up!!
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InuYasha › Het - Male/Female › InuYasha/Kagome
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
16
Views:
7,802
Reviews:
62
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
1
Category:
InuYasha › Het - Male/Female › InuYasha/Kagome
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
16
Views:
7,802
Reviews:
62
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
1
Disclaimer:
I do not own InuYasha, nor make money from this story.
A/N
Author's Note:
I wanted to say Thank You to Shaid! I read your review, and I realized that you're actually right. . . .
I've been rereading my story, ever since I posted the second chapter, and it just seemed to be missing something, ya know?
I'm going to rework the second chapter, I'm going to leave the first one up, I like the way that one flowed, but I'm definitely need to fix the second, like you said, I have seen the movie a "few" times, and when I started this, I didn't really want to do just a plain paste and copy job, but that's what it turned out to be. It doesn't give justice to the movie, or the Inuyasha Anime. I'm going to edit a few things in the first chapter as well, I really want this to have the "feel" of the crow, with the same basic principles, but I want to make it my own. Give me a day, and I'll have a better chapter up! And I don't get mad about constructive critiscism, I really appreciate it, because, have you ever noticed that sometimes you can't see your own mistakes until someone else points them out? ^,^ Thank you so much, and I'll see you on the flip side! Ja Ne!
I wanted to say Thank You to Shaid! I read your review, and I realized that you're actually right. . . .
I've been rereading my story, ever since I posted the second chapter, and it just seemed to be missing something, ya know?
I'm going to rework the second chapter, I'm going to leave the first one up, I like the way that one flowed, but I'm definitely need to fix the second, like you said, I have seen the movie a "few" times, and when I started this, I didn't really want to do just a plain paste and copy job, but that's what it turned out to be. It doesn't give justice to the movie, or the Inuyasha Anime. I'm going to edit a few things in the first chapter as well, I really want this to have the "feel" of the crow, with the same basic principles, but I want to make it my own. Give me a day, and I'll have a better chapter up! And I don't get mad about constructive critiscism, I really appreciate it, because, have you ever noticed that sometimes you can't see your own mistakes until someone else points them out? ^,^ Thank you so much, and I'll see you on the flip side! Ja Ne!