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by gelfy

schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
not gnna finish? you should, just check your formatting
person Kagome950
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It moved a bit fast, but I loved it. However if you would space the paragraphs a little more it would be easier to read. but still great story, please update soon!
person Lynns
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yo, I read your story and found it quite interesting. I would appreciate it if youldould e-mail me when you update!
Ja Ne!
Lynns
person gelfy
schedule August 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
not sure if i want to keep going with this or leave it be.
any comments welcomed
remember 1st fanfic :)
person ME
schedule August 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! and uh-oh!! now what??!! update^_~
person Tenseiga
schedule August 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good story you must update quickly. I enjoyed reading this very much.

Tenseiga

person ApriL
schedule August 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I Like the story so far =]
person ApriL
schedule August 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Update pLease!
person Mija
schedule August 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ha ha she would be the first to say it you gooo Kagome..now Inu be nice and tell her how you feel..btw love this chap as well update update update..please??? ty ty
person RavenShadow
schedule August 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a cute beginning I hope you update soon I want to know what is going to happen!